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for Train Ride

by Furuichiko

person Anonymous
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was beautiful. Loved it and while I don't mind lemons, it was sweet and perfect without. I loved that Sess had taken in the gang as his friends and his own.

What would have made this even more perfect would have been was a bit more fluff/mush at the end showing happily married Sess & Kag as the whole story has a bittersweet tinge with the gang all dead. Also hanging over this romance is the unspoken fact that Kag will very likely age and die before Sess...and if Shippo was struck by illness for purebreds, Sess will likely suffer from that too?! :( So sad... A happy epilogue of lovey SxK would be a lovely ending, if you ever decide to add to this. Great idea having the gang attend their wedding!

Thanks for a wonderful read.

person lara5170
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I wish there was more to this because I didn't want to stop reading. I'm curious about what her mom said about 'maybe this marriage you could give me some grandchild' it seemed as if she was referring to Kagome to being married before.
person Elsa
schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading this it was truly wonderful! :)
person wolfmoon
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like the idea of a mellowed out sesshomaru. And that was a good add on about the rest of the gang's spirits showing up for the wedding. Though if he were dead, would inu-yasha still have a problem with her moving on with her life? I like the choice of no sex. Very much. I enjoy reading people's ideas; but unfortunately, so often stories with sex become stories about sex. Does that make sense? I really enjoy the stories that bring up new ideas, or new emotional facets of familiar characters.
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
T.T that was beautiful