rate_review Reviews

Wonderful ^.^ I love the chase and the roughness. A very satisfying short. I really was into the primal-ness (if that's even a word) of the smut :D You did a great job with it. I'd love to read more like this.

I. FREAKING. LOVE. THIS!!!
My favorite line: "What the fuck did that mean? He'd had some kind of... of freaky samurai porn dream? About Sesshomaru?"
Ah man, this has SO MUCH POTENTIAL!!! I absolutely love this tho. It leaves your mind you wander at the end. I would LOVE to see how InuYasha would act around Sesshomaru, what "miracle painkiller" Miroku gave Inuyasha, etc.
Oh and the smut was FANTASTIC!!! I'm one of those writers that SUCKS at time constraints, so if I do have one, I procrastinate greatly... But smut also takes me a little longer (ok a lot longer) to write... But you pulled it off wonderfully!
Keep up the great work! I love reading your fics! ^^
♥Ruki♥Romance♥

WICKED!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more!

B reading U!

Was not expecting that surprise ending! I was expecting some kind of a surprise ending, but I was thinking it was going to be something along the lines of, after they were finished, Inuyasha flashing his fangs and saying "My turn." and Sesshoumaru taking off running with Inuyasha in hot pursuit. Not sure why that idea came to mind...LOL...but I loved your twist at the end just as much! I agree, any difficulties you had with writing this one-shot were definitely worth it in the end for Inuyasha's reaction, LOL. Good job!