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March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you are so mean. update soon. tease.
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March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
sad face are you not updating any more i would love to see more
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December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow.! I love the chapter, update soon. goodbye.
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December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was very short, and your writing style leaves a lot to be desired. I really dislike the tense you use to tell the story with. It is awkward and puts me off as a reader. Also you need to be careful about capitalization of proper nouns (names).
On a good note you are progressing the story with plot. Keep writing! I want to see what you choose to do with this.
On a good note you are progressing the story with plot. Keep writing! I want to see what you choose to do with this.