rate_review Reviews

Caught a few grammatical errors in the last three chapters. So, HA! There is a con; my only negative to give in a constructive review... (O_o)... I still like where this is going. It's entertaining watching Inu be charming instead of being a foul-mouthed, brat. It ought to be interesting when Sess is drug back in to the story kicking and screaming. Your response to Chp 5's cliffy made me laugh. Say what!? Lol. Look forward to your next update(s). XOXO

This story is beautifully written and has such a great storyline! I hate cliffhangers though! Ending right after they finally kiss is so very unfair to us readers. Please update super soon or I might pop with anticipation. =] beautiful job, and keep writing!! I can't wait to read the rest of your work. I hope it's just as good as this story! ={D

Okay, so yeah... I really like the way this is starting. I like the family atmosphere and love what you've done with Inuyasha. Although it IS only two chapters in, he still seems very much like his usual self only a confident, 'mature' adult. I love how he ran away from his dad, though. That was pretty funny :) And then Sesshoumaru running away like a spoiled brat, lol. I hope he isn't a cold jerk. I hope he's his usual stoic, dry self and very much a part of the family, just not right for Kagome. I didn't notice any type of mistakes, which is always refreshing. So, I don't really know what to offer by means of constructive criticism. So sorry, lol. I was just really into the story and couldn't believe I could go no further then chp 2. I definitely look forward to the next chappie. Thanks for writing!

I love it, the story flows really nicely with just enough detail given. Can wait to read more. :)

Can't wait for your next update! I'm so enticed! :D:D

Even though I'm a huge Sesshoumaru fan, I really look forward to reading more of this story. Maybe it's because you've made Inu Yasha confident. He's lots of fun to read when he has confidence. Please don't make Sess too much of an ass though! LOL Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to more.

good second chapter! really liking this so far!

In love with this story so far. I love the way you are portraying the characters. I can't wait to see where you take this story, the plot, the romance. :) Though I am trying to figure out how on earth Kagome can end up with our favorite dog-eared lover as things stand now. It will be very interesting to see how the story unfolds. Keep up the great work!

Nice start. I'm interested in seeing where you are going to go with this.