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for The Heir and the Spare

by Wolf.Blossom

person Anon
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon. I have been waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter.
person taixi
schedule December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is cute and sweet and I'm glad you're updating! I think you don't usually have many spelling/grammar errors but I noticed a glaring one in this chapter that I figured I should mention since it's repeated a number of times...this chapter repeatedly states that Inuyasha should go "woe his bride" when really I'm sure you mean to write that he wants to "woo his bride." It's a bit jarring to see woe in place of woo, especially given that the word woe has quite a negative meaning connoting great distress, and presumably Inuyasha is not intending to cause Kagome great distress :)
person Lillium Rose
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU for updating this so quickly!! Izayoi's character is amazing in this particular story.
I await the next chapter anxiously!!!!
person eli
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
follow the story is very interesting you're very talented
person Lillium Rose
schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This update DEFINITELY took you way too long!! PLEASE update again soon! I check this story obsessively waiting for what will happen next! Your writing style is beautiful and the characters are to die for in this. <3 huge fan.
person sheshar
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! You have no idea how long I have waited. You are seriously my favorite fan fiction author!! So excited you have no idea. No amount of exclamation points can express my excitement. Thank you!!
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
come on man update
person satterb
schedule July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love Izayoi in this story! Sometimes men are so blind. LOL I love this story and I can't wait for the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.
person foxy fire
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter. I wana know aht will happen when sess shows back up. and everything please please post the next chapter iam dieing to read more.
person Az
schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eek! This chapter gave me butterflies,