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by botticelliangel

person Ana23
schedule November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Arrrgh! I can't wait for the next chapter! What will Sesshomaru do now that Rin fled away?
person Mary
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Your fic is perfect! lol There weren't many good fics Sesshy/Rin in this year. T_T I loved how you describe Sesshomaru-sama. Cocksure =^.^= Please update soon, neh! *_*
person Megan
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please I hope you update soon, I have read all three chapters and I can't wait for the 4th chapter, I am in love with this story, please update, there are not that much of Rin and Sesshomaru fanfics out there, and yours is really good.

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Megan
person RinSess13
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You stopped in the best part! T_T Please, continue! Please, please, please... *-* I just read these three chapters and I couldn't stopped read until the end. *-* At first, in the first chapter, I didn't understand why Sesshomaru-sama had done that peculiar... hum... "punishment", O.o but, when Inuyasha explained everything I thought: "Oooh! Now I understood...". O.o I think I was with the same poker face that Rin might had in that moment. -_- Then, I thought: "Amazing! I was confused like Rin was!". lol It made me very happy, by be feeling the same thing that Rin. x3 It's because I liked very much of this fanfic... hum... empathy... with Rin. I'm so happy! xDDD So... please update soon! lol
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm...it's getting there!! Can't WAIT for more!!!
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm That was good...More plz!!
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have a sexy writing style. I enjoyed the first chapter more than this one but I look forward to more. Update soon!
person LP
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!! I like the way you write Sesshomaru:) "Cocksure" ...heh heh.^^
person C.G
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Rin has run away. Will Sesshomaru punish her when he finds her? I hope so. Please update soon.
person animegirl007
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...The housebroken idea was very funny....I hope you keep going with this....