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for My Woman

by scattered-dimensions

schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stop that! I'm running out of tissue because of you! Lol!

Seriously, though, another awesome chapter. Kinda wish Ayame would have died, but *shrugs* something tells me you have something planned for her.
person Shyneamor
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, InuYasha is such a baka...I just new she was in. I almost shed a tear myself after the elders denial. I can't wait to read more.
person KEdakumi
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such a great chapter! Soooo sad. Sesshoumaru knows someone was playing them (and I don't think he would take well to being used like that), are they going to bring that little fact up to Kouga and Yus..Yuz... That Grandfather Councilman? After all, those letters were sent in his name...
Awwww.... *throws bribe cookies in your general direction*
Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Cathyrin
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stupid bastard elders......kick them in the face. Repeatedly.
person nique217
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That stupid inuyasha...gahhhh...that stupid wolf....grrr plz update soon you are surely
playing with my emotions ...n that stupid ayame she needs to be executed asap...
the f*cking inuyasha always messing something up....please update soon
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god. You had me crying so hard! I can't believe the Council did that. Makes me wonder if Ayame's grandfather actually ~did~ have something to do with the letters or if she acted completely of her own accord. Does this mean the end of Koga and Kagome? Or what? I'm curious to know what happens next.
person puppydog
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is so good I can't stop reading it! More please!
person nique217
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really...really ....u are seriously playing with my emotions...i mean wtf koga...n kagome....good thing for sesso...but gah.....i mean come on i need to know what happpens next...to bad ayame i really wanted her dead.......broke my heart for the emotional downfall of the two...something needs to happen asap...n that hoshi (if i am spelling it right)...sesso needs to decapitate him asap n burn the rest of him with the acid...or have kagome stab him with her arrow repeatedly...truely having an emotional break down...sob* (T-T)
person Vyper
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really, really, really good story. I thoroughly enjoy how you've taken time with these characters and didn't just rush into it. I also like how much detail you put into each and every scene. Truly magnificent and very well written. There is one thing I feel I should bring to your attention. I noticed you use the word "taught" where you should use the word "taunt." Just thought I'd point that out.

I give this story a 10 out of 10 and I really look forward to what happens next.