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Oh, I am very much satisfied with this chapter. :) I love how Koga finally got to claim Kagome. Really looking forward to the aftermath and how things are going to go. Will he return to the pack? When he does, what will the Elders say? Or will he and Kagome fight and destroy the snake youkai, thereby earning the pack's respect even more? Thus making the Elders recant their decision? And when will Ayame and Hiroshi finally kick the bucket? Don't worry about answering my questions so much as most of them are me just speculating and getting excited and such.

It's really hard to find ~good~ Koga/Kagome fanfic. (Then again, it's hard to find good fanfic in general, regardless of the pairing.) I am really glad you decided to write this and I think you have an incredible talent.

I saw that you had reviewed CWW and I very much appreciate that. I'm glad you like it. Most of the story is finished, I'm just trying to work on the bits that I want to add for AFF and actually ~finish~ the story. (I said most of it was finished, but it's not entirely finished yet.) It's more of a cutesie story I wrote because my brain was suddenly struck with the idea one night while watching the Final Act. It really wasn't supposed to be as long as it ended up being. (You'll see what I mean there as I post the chapters.)

Oh! I forgot to add: I love that you kept the knot! Not too many people do that and it drives me bonkers! I think something that people always forget is that Koga, Sesshomaru, and Inuyasha are all canines. Yeah, they're demons, but they are canine demons, so why wouldn't they have knots? Honestly, I think the fact that they are demons would make the knot even more important. (Then again, I am a strange girl with furry tendencies...)

Still. Love the knot. That was all that I wanted to add. (Little hint, Koga has a knot in my story, too ;) )

Another great chapter.

I understand Saburo, Ginta, and Hakkaku's thinking, but they really should have waited for Koga to wake up before they left. I mean, with them there, Koga would not have been able to leave like he did and he and Inuyasha would not have fought. (Or, at the very least, they should have given Kagome some means to help her restrain him... And, by that, I am ~not~ suggesting Beads of Subjugation.)

Still, it'll be interesting to see if Inuyasha and Kagome reach him in time.

As always you never disappoint. On with the next chapter!

I love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep them coming =)

Wow. Hiroshi's a real dick, isn't he? (And not just because he has the part.) He's being awfully generous and tolerant with those snake demons. And very, very sneaky.

I think Saburo made a highly intelligent decision in bringing Koga to Kagome. The gods know he never would have thought to look between his Alpha's toes. I just hope Kagome and Kaede can heal Koga.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

I must admit that I am surprised that Sesshomaru did not bring up Hiroshi and the letter to the Elder Council. That seems highly unlike him especially given that it was clearly a trick. Or that Inuyasha didn't shout something about having been "invited by the council" thus bringing the situations to everyone's attention.

Other then that, things are sounding great so far and I eagerly await the next chapter.

You are most welcome! Love the story so I had to review! Anyway, keep it up!

And yet u do this to me again....that f*cking hiroshi....i want to slit his throat...and watch
the light die in his eyes...while his face is twisted in an anguish scream...that bastard....u better
update soon my nerves cant handle it

Yeah! Sesshoumaru is getting her outta her depression. He's such a softy. :D
Poor Kouga... Can't wait to see what happens next. Bet Ayame is being bad and spying, thinking he'll take her back now.
*Throws more bribe cookies at you* Needs more!