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Well that was certainly an interesting chapter. If not confusing, though that was my own fault. Some how, I missed chapter 18 so when I read they had mated I was lost. Went back and read it first though. Anyways, both good chapters. That was one heck of a turn in the latest one. Can't wait to read more! Especially how everyone back at Kagome's village reacts to the news!

Poor Satori........hopefully his eye heals. And Hiroshi will get what's coming to him hopefully. Maybe the snakes will eat him and hurt the elders so that Koga and Kagome can stride in and save everyone from the snakes so that way she's accepted and Koga doesn't get in trouble. Hopefully. Lol. But I guess I will see, ne? Keep up the amazing work.

Lol. I mean Saboru. Lol. Been reading to much of sesshoumarus stories that include his mother. Sorry for the mix up

Another good chapter. I love how the snakes are changing things, I mean, when does a plan ever go as planned? Poor Saburo though, losing his eye like that. Wonder how the Elders are going to respond, not to mention the rest of the pack, when it comes to light that one of their own has been conspiring against them. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

I just love this story, and this last chapter was sinfully good... keep it up ;)

As always it is wonderful. Keep going!

oh lovely lovely smut. yay!!!! it more than lived up to my expectations. i cant wait for when the elders find out. ha! Take that elders! thanks for the awesome update and amazing talent that your sharing.

to hell with the elders!!! start a new pack!!! asshole elders. and thank god for kagome finally telling kouga. about damn time. hurry with the next chapter. this is quickly becoming one of my most anticipated story updates.

Wait... is Kagome really going to let Koga make her his woman? I mean, I understand the desire, but wouldn't that ruin his chance of returning to the pack? And there's still the snake youkai.... Oooh! I cannot wait til the next chapter!

And you're welcome. :) Now I gotta get off the writer's block...

Chapt 16 awesome but i mean that stupid inuyasha always being a cock block
When did sesshomaru leave thatinuyasha and kouga was able to fight the way that they did
in chap 15 he was last seen keeping inuyasha busy...so he would interfere with kouga being healed.
I dont know maybe Im bugging..
Chapt 17 once again awesome finally Kouga is being dominant and taking what his n that crazy
cock block inuyasha really needs to get laid or something I mean he was cock blocking the whole
Time between K&K...but its good that he is finally letting up. So who will be the next cock block...Kin flies sesshmaru)...buhahahaha to funny...but if they do mate how will kouga be able to go back to the pack that was true to him. And what will happen with the snake demons and hiroshi (that bastrad) and that crazy bitch ayame....funny if sesshomaru tortures them n a evil n crazy way...
cant wait for the other chapts u keeping me on pins n needles here