Wonderful story! I binge read this whole thing so I'm emotionally wrung out and don't know how to put into words a proper review yet, but I'll come back to it and do it right! Until then I just want to say, wow, that was freaking incredible. Amazing. You are fantastic and I love Kouga soo much and your writing of his character was completely spot on! I hope you keep writing, if you have another site you are still posting fics on currently please let me know, I would love to follow you and read more of your writing! Danicaofelwes@gmail.com
Please email me so I can keep up with your stuff! It's wonderful!
This is wonderful! â¤ï¸
You did an amazing job with this story. I really enjoyed how you kept everyone in character, as well as gave us an interesting plot. Everything lined up nicely by the end and I really hope you continue writing.
I absolutely love this story! Though I wonder if you could write a little bit about what happens afterwards. Namely the birth the Kouga and Kagome's cub. Pleas let it be a boy.
Ok, so before I continued on with the story, I just felt the need to leave you a review after reading this chapter.
I adore this story! I am not usually one to seek out Kouga/Kagome fanfictions but even having done so a few times in the past, I have never yet come across such a wonderfully written piece. The characters stay in character, the storyline goes along with the anime, the scenes are full of passion and your writing is just unbelievable, it really is.
Normally I love the Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing so I was glad at the slight indications between them, even only as friends. I thought you portrayed that brilliantly. Something about the circumstances you created, making Kouga and Kagome's relationship something forbidden has added an exciting twist to the story which really hooks the reader.
Great job as far as I have read! I can't wait to continue
This was a great story, although I wish you would throw in an epiloge to let us know what the sex of the cub is and if its a hanyou or maybe a full blood yokia. That would be great!
I just wanted to say that I cannot stop reading your story! It has to be the best story I have read in a long time. I have enjoyed reading your story and the part where Kagome got banished from the Ookami tribe, had me in tears the whole time!! It was so sad, it was like I could feel her pain her sadness just from reading it. I just want to say what I AWESOME writer you are and to tell you how much I am enjoying this story so far, I can't wait to finish, if this were a book I would have it with me wherever I was so I could finish reading it, and it would probably end up being a book that I would pick up to read over and over again! I would have to say that if this were a book it would quickly become one of my personal favorites, and I'm a big reader. So that says something. I think I'm going to have to find a printer where I have access to unlimited paper and ink just so I CAN print this out and make into a book so I CAN read over and over again. Let me just say thank you for taking so much time and writing such a WONDERFUL story!! I can't wait to finish and find out what happens!!
Aw, its over? So sad...Great story though! I really loved it. Glad Kags is still alive and that they were able to get justice! I have to wonder what being pregnant, dying and brought back to life will mean for the child as it was with her at the time. Anyways, it was such a great story and I loved every second of it! The twist at the end with the elders was great! Good job hun.
Please update!!!!!! I love this story :)
PLEASE FINISH THE STORY, my friends and I love it, great job.
