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February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ever since I came across one of your fanfics here, I fell in love with your writing and felt compelled to read everything you've written. You are so talented! I don't normally even like alternative worlds with the Inuyasha characters but you set up such great hooks and your detailed writing style is impeccable. This was such a great start to something. Curious if you'll ever come back to write some more? If you have more writings on any sites please let me know! Thanks.
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February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! You have to continue!
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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Wish there was more.
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story so far! It's always nice to see fics on here that have actual plots in them and this one definitely seems like it'll be an entertaining read! Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to reading your next chapter!
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December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really cute first chapter. Although I see you haven't updated this story in a while, I'd love to see where it was going to go! Plus, what Inuyasha fan doesn't want Kagome to find happiness and for Kikyo to get some of what she deserves. :P. That said gimme more! You write well and I cannot get enough of your work! I am sad that you only have three pieces on here. Waah! Gimme more!
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice start :) I can't believe he ripped her pants off in the middle of the airport, lol! I suppose that IS one way to keep you from getting burned from a latte lol.
I didn't notice any grammar/punctuation errors, which is always refreshing. That's one of my snotty pet peeves because I notoriously get distracted by mistakes. I enjoyed the dialogue, especially at the very beginning, and like your writing style. I can tell you put a lot of effort in to your work.
I actually found this by coming upon Dominated, which was HOTT btw, and was pleasantly surprised by your technique. I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Keep up with the writing!
I didn't notice any grammar/punctuation errors, which is always refreshing. That's one of my snotty pet peeves because I notoriously get distracted by mistakes. I enjoyed the dialogue, especially at the very beginning, and like your writing style. I can tell you put a lot of effort in to your work.
I actually found this by coming upon Dominated, which was HOTT btw, and was pleasantly surprised by your technique. I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Keep up with the writing!
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I think you have a good thing going hear and I can't wait to read more. I am very very interested to read more and I hope that their will be more chapters to follow soon!!!! Good luck and such a good writer