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for Cloud 9

by sainmoth14

person angel23
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL It was so funny please update so OK.
person Elsa
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I would totally read more of this. :D
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
the start is quite interesting, I'd like it if you continued. I would like to see what else you had planned for this fic.
person Jenno
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'd really like to see where this goes! :)
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHY YOU NO WRITE MORE?????
person Alysssa
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
While the premise was interesting, the odd use, or lack there of, of commas is seriously distracting as my brain keeps stopping and wanting to add or try to figure out where it does belong. I would strongly suggest finding a beta or friend to go over your work to fix such issues. Beyond that, the storyline has a good premise and promise!

Have a great day.