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I really like this story I'm hoping that you continue it soon I'm dieing for more. My theory is I think some how Kikyo is behind all the problems with the villages that vanished Within inuyasha's boundaries and the attack on shippo.

Abandoned come on this was not bad shourt chapters but atleast one page ive seen realy bad ones you loose your pasword just stop writing

It's really good so far. I hope you get back to finish it. I like the conflicts and am looking forward to being able to read the rest. 

Another great story! Are you going to continue it? I know life can get in the way and creativity can wane, but I really hope to see more of this story. Hope life is treating you good!

I LOOOOOVVVEE how you have written the dynamic of their relationship. For me, being a mushy romantic, it is a truly difficult task to keep these two in character while building their relationship. You make it seem effortless.

Amazing!!! Cant wait for more!!!!!

PLEASE keep going with this!!!!

You have me hooked!!!! Please, PLEASE! The second I get some cash, I'll send you some via Paypal if you keep this going!!!

This is feeding my imagination, which, as an adult is really what I need!!!

AMAZING work!!!!

I was finally able to catch up after a long hiatus of not having internet access. Halfway through chp 24, I said "Oh no!", scrolled to the bottom, reaffirmed that I could go no further, and sulked at the monitor. Lol.

I think you're doing a great job with this storyline. There's still spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that really makes me pause to mentally correct for very long. I can't help it, really. It's one of my OCD issues. Forgive me.

Keep up the good work and please ask your beta what "clow" means for me! I'm still very curious about that word, lol.

Amazing story..I laughed my way through parts of it!

AWESOME STORY IS AWESOME!!!! please update soon, I'm dying to see what happens next