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well, we knew something bad was coming. hopefully she survives this.
your story is epic and i look forward to more.

I love this story from day 1. i hope kotono wakes up soon. thanks for wrighting.

I Love this story its one of my faves. Can't wait to see what is in store for Kagome and the demoness's baby. thank you for a grate story.

I truly have enjoyed this piece. I have read it all in one sitting, as I am sure many others will be compelled to do. The characters are beautifully drawn in this fanfiction, and I felt it very easy to get attached to them. The rivers of emotion run very deep, and are very believable of our favourite characters in an alternate reality. And to those who may like to point out Kagome's general likeability amongst the demons as a mary sue issue, I personally disagree in this case. She canonically had encounters with demons that just decided not to kill her because she was interesting or useful. Sesshomaru himself in canon would downplay it, but he has saved her life twice at the least, counting the movies. Koga of the wolf demon tribe!? Need I say more! It is not a stretch, given the proposed upbringing of Kagome, that she could be exactly this resilient and good natured amongst otherwise lethal creatures. She is still our incredibly ballsy Kagome, and she is appreciated for her mind, but it is not like she doesn't make mistakes or ever act like a bitch, cause she did! But her actions are dealt with rather responsibly, and I really enjoyed that about the evolution of her character so far. I daresay that I have official standpoints on all OCs, and that is that they must be awesome if they are going to be main characters. This piece is a great example of excellent OCs. I especially enjoy Sesshomaru's mother Chiyoko and his first concubine Kotono, for obvious reasons I do not need to go into as this review is already mammoth.
long story short, this rocks my sox

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Updatee Soon !

I just discovered this story and I love it! I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading it (I am not a big Kagome/Sesshomaru fan) but it pulled me in. I had to finish reading all the chapters that were up. I just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. I can't wait for updates. I keep wondering how the story will turn out, based on all of the seeming hints. Keep up the great work! By the way, I like the Ink Smudge forum and motto best, though all of them were good.

Yay I can review! It was amazing, I can't wait till I see the next chapter. I'm gonna have to actively check it out cause this place doesn't give you the option of getting up dates but that's ok cause I love this story. You are amazing and I can't wait till I can read more.

One word WOW. This is an amazing story so far. A refreshingly new story line with original characters like Kotono who become almost the guiding hand in the story and add to the narrative. I really appreciate the speed at which you are adding new chapter. It almost seems as if as soon as I finish a chapter the new ones are already up. I am thoroughly enjoying your story so far.

this is proving to be an awesome story. just what i need after struggling along in a mire of ordinarily or darker edged fics which were bringing me down... or ones that had an interesting idea and promptly killed it with typos right left and central.
I needed this, a well written, engaging, typo free fic.
Kags is a lot of fun and the characters around her are equally engaging. when she and sess finally do get their lemon scene it's going to be amazing, i can just feel it.
anyway, looking forward to the next chappie.

as for you forum name, which sort of image do you want to portray?
the first choice is softer, more romantic in feel. It has the slant that all writing inside is going to be of romantic edge. It's kind of fluffy.
The second is harder edged and doesn't really give you a hint as to what sort of writing is inside. To me it calls up a sort of press writing to mind. More professional some how. The name is very catchy though.
The third does call up a joy of writing but without any real bias, as long they enjoy what they're writing. Or do they write joy into all of their stories? (Joy = love?)
anyway, go with which even one says what you want to achieve best.

I love the story so far, and can't wait for an update! ;)