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First off, I love your story. I think it's absouletly beautiful but i am very interested in seeing the difference between this version and the threesome version. However, i'm having trouble finding the disictions. Can you point out those chapters or give a clearer view on the differences?

Thank very much again for your story!

I was wondering where all the great authors have gone. I'm glad to have found you. Beautiful story. I cannot wait for another chapter. Good luck with life. We're supporting you.

I've enjoyed the story so far I couldn't stop reading even if I tried. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the great story.

Thank you for making Naraku a good guy. Please Please Please Please keep him that way. i am soooo over with him being the bad guy it has been done to death. I AM SOOOO HAPPY THAT YOU ARE BACK Please Please Please Please DON'T LONG GO AWAY THAT LONG AGAIN. AND I HAVE A QUESTION I HAVE LEARNED THAT IN CERTAIN ERAS IF A CONCUBINE GAVE BIRTH TO A MALE AND NO OTHER BOYS WERE BORN THAT CHILD WOULD RECEIVE TALE IS THAT GOING TO HAPPEN TO KAGOME? ALSO DOES SHE STILL HOLD THE Jewel of Four Souls? Please Please Please Please up-date ASAP Please Please Please Please!!!!!!!

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!

I love the way you portrait the characters, I actually keep reading it from start to finish every time you post a new chapter, just cause I love this story so much!

i am not finished reading this fic yet; but there is something that is bothering me...the servant's name...is it sieji or shinji? you have used both in the same paragraph. unless i am missing something and there are two of them...which may be the case, but i thought there was only one. just had to mention that. sorry. other than that little hang up, i am enjoying this story immensely! it is very well written and i cannot read it fast enough. XD

Well, that was an interesting chapter o.O I can't wait to see how it pans out and how Naraku develops.

In general, I am not a Sessh/Kags fan. Most of the fics about this particular pairing annoy me for various reasons, mostly having to do with the behavior of other characters. Once in a great while however, I find a fantastic story that draws me into the pairing despite myself. This story is one of them. I love your writing style- it flows the way i'd like mine to, the way it sounds in my head. Putting it on paper is another thing entirely, I've discovered. Anyway, I can't wait to read more, so please please PLEASE update soon.

Doing great =)