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for Kindergarten Flirting

by Wolf.Blossom

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

(Sniff) I love it!!!! It's the best!!! Encore!!!!

schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was an adorable, hilarious, and sweet story! I loved it so much. It was definitely one of my favorite A.U.'s ever. I loved the way you incorporated all the characters into this story, even Naraku and Yura. I've read quite a bit of your stories, and this one is definitely one of my favorites. Great job!
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how sad I was to see this story end!
I loved every bit of it and would love you forever if you continued on!
Amazing story, darling!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really loved this story! The humour in it is really awesome. Made me laugh out loud!
person catherina
schedule March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story it was such a pleasure to read. the quality of this story and how its written is done very well. the way the author emotionally connects her character is both impressive and cunning. theres no meaningless filler in this story and details are never forgotten. over all really impressed with the author and her writing style. congrats a job well done. i found my self laughing, crying, being angry, or sad by being sucked into this story. and forever will be in my favorites. i hope you continue to write. the way the author crafted the story was pure genius.
person Yasmin
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS SOOOO GOOD, ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. Hands down one of my favorites out of the many I've read on this website and definitely my favorite InuYasha/Kagome story as of NOW. So well written and really tugged on the heart strings, perfect balance of everything! Every single reward you've gotten for this story I'm convinced you deserved; once I started reading it was nearly impossible to stop. So much love for this story,really happy I came across it!
person Crittenz
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know this story isn't ecatly new and it's probably been done for a bit but I wanted to say how much I absolutely loved it!
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the whole thing. Again, great job! I was constantly bursting out laughing at the way Inu/Kag interact with each other and the ending was very sweet. I added this to my 'Recommended Reading' on my profile. In fact, I just added it apparently for the second time and now must go back and take one off, lol. I think you did a wonderful job with this and really liked your writing style. It was structurally sound and well thought out. I kind of wished there was a little more danger involved, but that's just my personal opinion (which you can take as a grain of salt and toss out the window if you like). There were grammatical errors slipped in there every once in a while, but nothing I found too distracting. And that says something since I consider myself a Grammar Nazi who notoriously gets distracted by mistakes like they're something shiny that I want to fix but can't... (O_o) ... Overall, I really enjoyed reading your story and hope to see more from you.
person Trish
schedule August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You my dear, made a wonderful story!! I kept my nose in the computer every night for the last 3 nights to read it all, I absolutely loved it!!!! Great job!!!!!!
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.. Happy endings are always good and I needed to read something good tonight thank you. You should get an award it is wonderful. the story folwed so smothley and did not feel forced at all. They get to use the puppy tails lines themselvs. and I cant wait to see the dresses I tried to imagin them but my imagination failed me