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by Yashahime

schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh Shippo is definitely going to be a handful. I wonderif Sesshomaru will handle demon-style with just pure dominance or if some more human methods will be required. He will indeed learn and hopefully come to adore Sesshomaru just as well. great job!
person Vyper
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stupid princesses ruining good moments between the brothers. I hope there is some good sex scenes in the next chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru is with Inuyasha and I can't wait for your next update.
person Kailover
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting full of suprises. I wonder what's gonna happen next? keep up the good work
person nchsmi
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this story is great! Chie Hime must truly have a death wish, and her mother is just as crazy as she is. At least her father is trying to save some face, but pleading with Sesshomaru. Maybe his pleas will have Sesshomaru thinking that his daughter is out of her mind, and just maim her. I hope her mother doesn't do anything stupid, it would be too bad if he'd had to lose both his mate and child. But, I certainly hope Chie doesn't compound her errors, by trying gain an allaince with Sesshomaru's mother. That bitch is crazier than Charlie Mansen.

Keep up the goodness!

B reading U!
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooo great chapter. Yeah Inu equalized I love that. Huh how can the healer not know there are three pups? Thats kindda incompetent, especially if Sesshymom saw it immediately. Hey you have an incompetent healer caring for lovely inu, *pours white chalk on all authors shoes!* :P lol seriously it needs an bit more clarification why the healer cant see it.Lady brown inu gonna end up as a smear on the bottom of destroyed shoes... how sad. *smirk. Seriously enjoyable. Thanks
schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
three babies?! wow. inuyasha is definitely going to have his hands for. That's what Shippo's punishment is??? Sesshomaru is being nice and it isn't working every well. I feel like they're all less in obvious touch and/or affected by their demon instincts than other stories, but this is still REALLY good. I hope Inuyasha still keeps his sword around just incase there's a strange moment of opportunity for that jealous woman. great job and can't wait for more!
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like it. It's not very often that the mating goes so easily between these to and I'm glad that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru understand each other. I'm very curious as to what their kid will look like. Does it take 9 months like a human? great job and I hope you continue to update so quickly. :D
person Kailover
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad the pup is alright and that Sesshomaru is willing to take Shippou as his ward. I'm looking forward to Shippou creating mischief for him. lol. Keepn up the good work.
person Vyper
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was kind of fun. I kind of hope that Sesshoumaru is able to teach Inuyasha table manners. He will be eating around the couriters at times I am certain so it would be good for him to know how to eat like a civilized young man and it would be good for Inuyasha to want to eat as such. I think Inuyasha would appreciate lessons and things he didn't get while as a kid. It would just be nice for him to do some things that he never did before.
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How deliciously mature of the two inus. refreshing definitely refreshing. Shippo needs to be taken in hand, cute or not being spoiled is bad for children. Hopefully a canny tutor who works with Inu to chalenge and curb the kit would be good. Anyway great story thanks so much for all the hard and fast work.