rate_review Reviews

I have only one suggestion, and that is that you remove the word "just" almost everywhere you use it. It creates a very informal tone with your writing that I think would be greatly improved simply by making that modification. It's fine when a character who speaks informally (like Inuyasha) uses it in speech, but
It really shouldn't be anywhere else in text ( at least not the way you're using it). For example: -It just made him lose control.- the word just isn't necessary and makes it sound very informal. You can however use it as a modifier in some situations like : "There was just barely enough light to make out his face"
Other than that it was nice :)

This was a wonderful story thank you so much for writing it. I loved how the two got together and in the beginning with Inuyasha running away from the leches of demons after his ass. I also enjoyed the fight scene with the bitch and Inuyasha popping out babies to and fro and still trying to defend them that's Inuyasha the sweetheart fighter. And the ending when you included Kouga and how jealous Sessh got that was priceless especially when Sessh's mom said that bit about Kouga and Inuyasha getting together if it hadn't been for Ayame that would probably be so true. Sessh actually does have something to be jealous of so adorable. The best part was when Inuyasha was due and threatened the healer and then Sessh with his balls now that was hilarious I laughed through that whole bit. Thank you so much keep up the good work.

WHAT A GREAT STORY! LOVED IT. Great job.

I really liked this story. Wish there was more detail at some parts, but otherwise I enjoyed it.

great job thanks for sharing.

Good story. Loved it. Sad that it's over but I am sure you will post many more awesome lemony inu/sess fics. I wait patiently for them.

My, My, MY! You really do update quick!
Omg this chapter had me cracking up, especially when Inuyasha yells at the healer for not knowing how many kids were in him! :)
Anyway, the powers the 2 pups have, being able to hide their presence, is quite awesome! I can't wait to see what havoc they bring to the Inu brothers!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!

Ruki-chan

I hope nothing happens to Yasha and if she does harm him I hope Sessh cuts her to ribbons. Update again soon please.

Aw three healthy pups. Cute. Wonder what kind of trouble they will get into and how Chies' family will take her passing. Update again soon please.

Hmm that is kindda dangerous, wat if the pups are in trouble? still love the idea of driving Sesshy nuts, but they had better be nice to inu. Nice fight. I though Sesshy mom was gonna intervene? really nice to see the pup do it herself. Great thanks