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As it stands Sesshoumaru is jackass and he doesn't deserve Inuyasha. I hope Inuyasha gets to keep the baby. Maybe Kouga might be able to offer sanctuary. I hope things turn up for Inuysha. Looking forward to the next update.

Poor Yasha. Hope he gets out of there and far away.

Awwwww... EVIL SESSHIE... EVIL... LOL This chapter made me laugh. Way to go Izayoi! Great writing.

Oooo.. I love this story... please update soon! You know I kinda imagine what would happened next. Well somehow after they were sleeping together, Inuyasha end up pregnant. He afraid of telling his brother so ran, while of course Sesshomaru chase him to get him back as mate. hehehehe... my version of imagination. Oh well good luck with the story!

I think Kouga should put in an offer to mate Inuyasha and then we shall see how Sesshoumaru reacts to that. Sess is such an ass in this story, but I hope that he starts to show that he wants Inuyasha as a mate. I just think a little jealousy could push things the right way.

Very nice. Yes, He is very much Sesshoumaru isn't he. XD"" Asshole attitude is expected until he learns his lesson. LOL Very good writing, i look forward to the next. ^_^

I hate the fact that he is going to be an asshole, but I am sure something tragic or big will come that will make him realize that he truly loves or care for yasha. HOpe more is to come soon please.

This story is so sad. It makes me want to cry for Inuyasha.

Sounds interesting!

I'm sure you know, after you reading MY story, that it's hard for me to see Inuyasha treated poorly. I'll just hope that Sesshoumaru pulls his head out of his own ass, and realizes Inuyasha is a gift.

Can't wait to see where you go with it next!

I don't usually bother with yaoi if 'mpreg' is listed but I was curious enough to give this a quick scan through. I'm glad I did because I noticed a mistake you'll want to correct. You specifically said in the flashback that Inuyasha had moved in with them shortly after his mother's death, but then turned around and said he had plans to visit his mother because he'd earned the days off after doing well at school. If you want Izayoi to be alive and a reprieve for Inuyasha, an escape at times, that's a good outlet for her character and so you just need to remove the mention of her death. Inuyasha could have perhaps moved in with his father because as lord, he had insisted he could better care for the boy; Izayoi could be a poor woman who let her son move in with his father to enjoy the spoils of living with a rich parent, and perhaps also Toga is paying for him to go to a better school, and he would only do that if Inuyasha lived under his roof. Plus there's training with a sword and all that other stuff that Izayoi couldn't do for him; it makes sense that in Inuyasha's best interest as an inu he should spend time with other inu-youkai. Just a suggestion on how you can fix it. Other than that little boo-boo it has a good beginning and build-up to what I'm sure will be a very intense situation once Sesshoumaru realizes he got Inuyasha pregnant and has to start thinking about being nicer to the hanyou and actually mating him. So good job over all, just watch out to keep your details consistent.