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for Change of Heart

by PrincessAurora

person Anonymous
schedule July 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Why not have Inuyasha be Preagent with Sesshomaru pups?

Why not have in (One OR More Chapters). whil both are on the bed,

Have Sesshomaru sit on the bed with his back Agents the head bord, Inuyasha stand with One Leg on both sides of SesshomaruLegs, with Sesshomarus Sucking on Inuyasha Cock, with Sesshomaru hands on Inuyasha ASS, with Inuyashas hands in Sesshomarus hair. Your Reaily Good at cuming up with kinky words. EVER NEED IDEAS EMAIL ME AT ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com

Please know that I forget thinks a lot so I may not get right back to You. :) :p

person Anonymous
schedule July 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I laughed just was I got to the part were Inuyasha was Laughing, I Laughed even herder to the point I was Coughing and had to sit up to breath.

This REMINDED Me of the time I coughed so hard My vision almost went black, You made laugh to the point were this is second on My list.

person sma_orlando
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. Would be great if you finish it.
schedule February 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please write more of this amazing story. I'm sorry I have not written a review before now, but I started reading and couldn't stop. It's so powerful. You are truly gifted. I feel like I'm watching a movie in my head. The love of the brothers is simply beautiful and intense. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for the lovely dreams.
person mary applegarth
schedule June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Exspecially the sex scenes. They were really hot. Please update again very soon. I want to happens to Jakken and if the find the other traitor. I also want to know happens at the Mating Ceremony.
person Cymberle
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story. It's so engaging and well written. I wish I had time to continue reading tonight. Kudos!
person Kerbear
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Though I know I should review between chapters,I wanted to know what was going to happen and just kept
reading. This a great story and I hope theres more very soon.I almost feel sorry for Jakan can't wait to see how
All the children handle him as well as the southren lord.


Nicely done :)
person Peya Luna
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i´m torn between pitying kouga and laughing my a# off...oh well, serves him right! life punishes those who delay - and apparently those who court overbearing mikos ;-)
but joking aside, if kouga is lucky he might find himself a mate among the many visitors coming to the ceremony...poor guy gets rarely out of his caves so this is a rare chance for him to finally meet someone.
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed this story very much.
person nchsmi
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! Kouga, you naughty, naughty wolf! Must remember to keep your hands off what don't belong to you! I kind of feel sorry for Kouga, like a lot of people they never see what is right in front of his eyes. I wonder if he will tell InuYasha. I hope he does. If InuYasha knows then he would be able to talk to him about it. Naturally, InuYasha wouldn't encourge Kouga into thinking that there would be more between them. But, he could help Kouga think past his infatuation with him. Or, at the very least, he could keep Sesshomaru from KILLING him! This was great! The ulitime of teasers. It was cool!

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