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for Spiel Mit Mir

by botticelliangel

person Rayne
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. The way you portray each character and the emotions/feelings the are experiencing is truly awe inspiring.
person Snow
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm loving where this is going and I can;t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I love that there are multiple plots taking place so smoothly. Can't wait until the next chapter!
person Vyper
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that last chapter. I want to have Sesshoumaru mark Inuyasha and for them to finally admit they love each other. It is painfully obvious that they do. I feel for the females, but the brothers were meant to be. Kagome should go back to her time and marry that Hojo guy if she can't handle sharing Inuyasha with his brother. Sesshoumaru should come first in Inuyasha's life. They are brothers first. Rin and Kagome came later.
person Vyper
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Sesshoumaru's Mom. I am so glad that she loves her little Inuyasha as much as she loves Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person nchsmi
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I like your husband's comment on the devil vs. Japaness women. It's so funny how men seem to share the same views on a woman's ire! LOL!


B reading U!
person Vyper
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope no one removes Inuyasha's mark from Sesshoumaru. It is obvious in some ways Sesshoumaru has started to love his brother and vice versa. I think Kagome needs to grow up and accept that Sesshoumaru is Inuyasha's mate now and same with Rin. The two females should be happy that the brothers are not fighting each other anymore and should allow them their public displays of affection towards one another. At least Inuyasha isn't treating Sesshoumaru badly and he is much more gentle than his Father treated Sess. If Kagome was such a good person in heart she would accept her place in Inuyasha's life with Sesshoumaru and accept their feelings for one another. I just think Kagome is being rather selfish. Sesshoumaru needs Inuyasha and the two belong together. Kagome and Rin will die before them so I think Inuyasha needs Sesshoumaru for the kind of love that will last a lifetime. This way neither of them will be alone when the females die. I think Sango and Miroku also need to respect Inuyasha's feelings for his brother. The humans need to stop being prejudice towards Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's relationship. What Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru share is a beautiful thing.
Kagome in sitting Inuyasha so much is childish and mean. She didn't even care about how badly she hurts Inuyasha with those sit commands of hers. I think Sesshoumaru should make Kagome take the beads off of Inuyasha since Inuyasha is not Kagome's pet. The sit commands may have been necessary during certain times, but she seems to use them any time she is mad at Inuyasha. I know Sesshoumaru stuck up for Inuyasha and I think it was sad that Kagome did not apologize for breaking his arm. Like the others of the pack they just assume Inuyasha can take care of himself and so far only Sesshoumaru has shown Inuyasha compassion. Although Sess is Inuyasha's beta mate he doesn't treat Sesshoumaru like a bitch and the two of them enjoy the sex they share. By keeping his brother's mating mark Sesshoumaru can feel safe that Inuyasha will protect him if need be. The brothers need this bond since it is beyond what a human can understand. Inuyasha needs this affection from his brother since they have spent years fighting each other rather then treating one another like brothers should.
Also if Kagome was so good hearted she wouldn't be calling Sesshoumaru names. It isn't like Kagome is perfect and Sesshoumaru deserves respect since he also protects the pack from harm. Kagome should be grateful the demon Lord even puts up with her. Sesshoumaru is understanding of Inuyasha's love toward Kagome even if I think she doesn't deserve Inuyasha's love with the way she has been acting. Sesshoumaru even lies for Inuyasha to keep from causing fights between Kagome and Inuyasha.
I also feel bad for Sesshoumaru since he is a powerful demon that has such a terrible curse on him. It would be frustrating to have to constantly try to keep other males from raping him. I also think their Father is a total asshole for hurting his son verbally as well as physically. It had to be horrible to be treated like a bitch with his Father and his Father not showing him that he loved his own son. I just hope Inuyasha sometime will let Sesshoumaru know he is loved and accepted.
person Vyper
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sesshoumaru keeps his mating mark to Inuyasha forever. He deserves love from his brother and I think their mating is a beautiful thing. Kagome is so selfish sometimes and I wish she would either go away or accept that Inuyasha can love his brother too.
person Briinaa
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ewww an Inu and Kagome moment.... I think I just died. If there's anything other then Inu and sessy moment I would cry any who I'm enjoying this a lot , well the sessy and Inu moments that is... I don't know why but rin annoys me in this , along with Kagome.
person Vyper
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn that last chapter was hot! I loved it! I want more! More more more!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Vyper
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting for Inuyasha to take Sesshoumaru and make him his mate. I think that would be so hot. I mean I am glad Sesshoumaru has Rin and Inuyasha has Kagome, but the brothers together are too hot to handle. I want Inuyasha to really show Sesshoumaru that he is not only loved, but worshiped as Inuyasha shows Sesshoumaru's body the kind of passion it deserves. Sorry I just love Inu/Sess relations.