Pleeeease finish this story! I would totally pay for the finished storyðŸ˜
Pleeeease finish this story! I would totally pay for the finished storyðŸ˜
First of all, I must admit that I hesitated in picking up the fic because I mainly wanted Inucest and wasn't sure how to take the other pairs. But I'm super glad I gave this fic a chance. Your characterizations are so on-point and believable, and that's definitely what allowed me to accept the pairings.
Your Rin is so accepting of the brothers' relationship and has an air of wisdom to her (albeit sometimes she seems too perfect). And your Kagome, although she's initially obnoxious, there's sign of intelligence to her actions that prevents her from being just annoying for sake of being annoying. Like one part that stuck to me most was when she's said to Sesshomaru, "you call me for what I am (priestess), I will call you for what you are (bitch)" or something like that. I thought that was gutsy!
As for the brothers... oh man it's beautiful! I loved how you revealed Sesshomaru's curse through the eyes of Inuyasha, which made Inuyasha desire for his brother and to protect him. Poor Sess…raped, constantly pursued by males, needing to prove over and over he’s not a ‘bitch’. This makes the fact that Sesshomaru trusted Inuyasha enough to submit completely to him, and only him, even more satiable. Even better that he’s still powerful and in-character while being the beta. And then what happened in ch14…I was really impressed with how he pacified Inuyasha in a gentle manner. Overall, I love love the current dynamic :P
I’m a bit weirded out by the whole ‘relationship’ with Inukimi and Naraku, esp when the latter is taking on the appearance of her son…And there’s still a ton of mystery to Inukimi…such as what exactly is this curse that she has, why she would prefer Inuyasha over Sesshomaru, who this mysterious past mate is, etc. I’m not sure if that last chapter was the end (as previous chapters said), or is there more? It doesn't feel concluded.
All in all, I love how you reinterpreted a lot of the canon events. Tho it’s been 5 years now, I hope you find time and interest to continue. After all, Inuyasha still needs to receive his mark!
I enjoy your writing very much. Normally I wouldn't be into a story with incest, but if I'm being honest, your story is really hot to me. But more so than that, I think you do an excellent job of conveying emotion in your characters and really fleshing them out. That's why I really hope to see more from you one day...
Good luck!
And honestly, I appreciate you taking the time to update this wonderful story that has consumed my waking thoughts to the tune of 4 rereads. I gobbled up the update and I am so curious to know what Naraku has planned.
Looking forward to the next part!