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for Stealing a Beloved Butterfly

by dragondeedee3

person Pumpkinpi
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far, I don't know much about the Loveless manga, but I will try to watch it to learn more. I look forward to the next chapter!!!
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just curious to see how things are going with this awesome story. I would love to read another chapter, more on Souki would be very nice and Inuyasha's punishment will be phenomenal I'm sure! Hope you continue on with this and Evil Rising soon!
schedule June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, very nice chapter. I loved poor Inu's continuing denial from Sesshomaru, should be interesting to see his punishment now that he's been so very disobedient and removed the cage without permission. I do really like Sesshomaru's nature in this story, so very cruel and calculatingly sadistic but also very caring for his submissives. Like his claiming Soubi, brutally mounting him and dominating him totally only to remove all his scars after he sated himself, very nice. Excellent work, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. Brilliant idea with having Soubi's scent on the paintings Sesshoumaru bought. And Inuyasha's torment is adorable as always. Sesshoumaru and Soubi make a great couple. Sess can be just as cruel as Seimei and not so childish at the same time. I look forward to the next chapter. Seimei would be so jealous if he found out Soubi had found a Master so much better than him.
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, very nice. I love the dominant sub relationship between Inu and Sess, Inu seems totally dependent on his aniki but is still as crass and foul mouthed as he normally is. Should be interesting to see how the new characters merge in, especially with a dominant and cruel Sesshomaru at the helm :P I especially liked the chastity cage on poor Inu, the predicament bondage like nature of it was great; either he takes it off early and gets punished or leaves it in and suffers his arousal...and I imagine then gets punished :P

Excellent work, can't wait to read more!