rate_review Reviews

Inuyasha's ebay attitude was hilarious and a spot on example of his personality! I liked the way you integrated Kagome into this chapter. She felt like the voice of reason, and had a cool and grown up vibe to her. Can't wait for the next chapter and the "fun" parts... lol plug...

I just wonder how Kouga is going to feel when Sesshoumaru steals his lover. I think the wolf will be pretty upset that Sesshoumaru is taking his place in Inuyasha's heart.

Ah, another chapter. You certainly write at a manic pace (a good thing). I liked that you had a slight diversion away from the main plot with Kouga checking out cars not meant for Sesshomaru's list. It showed his level of dedication to the job. I admit I giggled a little with the mention that he was still plugged. It would be funny if Inuyasha forgot about it. That made me giggle again... anyways great job!

I like the detail you put into these chapters. I look forward to reading more.

Ok it is pretty hot that Kouga and Inuyasha were getting it on, but I would love to see a jealous Sesshoumaru take Inuyasha to new heights of pleasure and make Inuyasha his own.

Wow... I ended up rereading chap 3 twice. I was wondering when you were going to delve into sexual aspects of the story, considering the story thus far has been fairly technical and plot driven. But I was completely thrown off guard when you made that leap. There was aboslutely no build up for it... not that kinky sex needs an introduction. ;) Puts a good spin on things. Looking forward to more chapters.

Hello, nice to see the second chapter up! You did a fine job with the description again. I appreciated that you took the time to explain how cars "age" in different parts of the country. Having grown up in Nevada and moved to Mass I have seen that first hand. My dad owns a 1963 pontiac lemans, not super cool like the cars you're describing... but it was my grandmother's so sentimental value. You wouldn't believe what the humidity did to the leather seats, awful. Anyways back to your story, very good description. The first scene of conversation between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru was good dialog, and I would like to see description not in terms of cars, but grounding what are they doing during the conversation description. Also what is "Concours quality"? The conversation about it was enough to let me know it is important (and I know I could just look it up... probably will...)
Looking forward to see what happens!
Good job, and Happy Writing :)

Ahhh....Glad to see that your back to the style of writing that I loved reading from you! Don't ever change again, boo! Damn whatever those other freaks said! This was great!!!!! I'm so looking forward to reading more soon!

B reading U!

I love this story so far. I seriously hope you will have a new chapter soon.

Wow. I'm hooked. I love that you go into such animated detail about Inuyasha's work with the cars. It shows his passion... and honestly got me into the story even though I know nothing about cars. Seriously all I know is that mine works good enough to get me places.
Setting up the shop, and having it be Inuyasha's dream is an excellent intro to rationalize why he would go to such length's to complete Sesshomaru's list. :) Dang good job! Can't wait to read more!
Happy writing!