rate_review Reviews

I must say you melted my brain with that first part.. WOW! Sesshou wearing a plug... What else can I say... That got me right there... XD"" We're all sick puppies aren't we... Keep on writing amazing my dear. ^_^

Woo-hoo! LOL, I wonder how long Sesshoumaru is going to keep Inuyasha hostage.

I so love that last chapter. Sesshoumaru is seducing Inuyasha and that just turns me to mush.

So I wasn't as impressed with this chapter as some of the previous ones. You do very good with the descriptions as always, and good with business dialog between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. But I would have liked to see you write out of your elememt on this one; for instance I am left wondering about their interpersonal relationship building during their lunch, and well the rest of the day they were together. It just felt strange to jump from straight up no-nonsense business and description to sexual induendo between two complete strangers. Two complete strangers who happen to be in a legitamate business deal. I'm not saying there needs to be tons of romancing or anything, but unlike the chapter where it was surprise butt sex between Kouga and Inuyasha, there is no previous relationship whatsoever between these two. The overall feeling was very disconnected.
As a reader I am a little bit frustrated with this, and I also have confidence in your ability to write. I have a feeling that my frustration on this chapter will be cleared up with the next one. (ah the downfalls of reading wip)
Thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Woo-hoo! Yeah, kinda short chapter, you're right, but that ending totally makes up for it! Goodie! Goodie! *dances in excitement* Super looking forward to the next chapter! Like duh, who wouldn't be? LOL

That is evil leaving it right there, you do realize that .... *SIGHS* ....Amazing work... I'll be waiting patiently. XD"

Hello again! This chapter shows a lot of progression. Loved how Kouga tries to get the keys. But in all honesty the enema thing makes me gag a little... so I just skimmed right over that to the clamps and other fun things! Cool introducing Miroku in this part of the story. I like his cautous side, and that he gives into racing anyways. I wonder if Sesshomaru's going to be mad that they were driving his cars so recklessly... maybe he'll punish Inuyasha? Great job again!

I loved the sex scene in this last chapter, but it was so short. I was really hoping to find out if Kouga ever got those keys.

I'll have you know, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter -_^

Long time reader, first time reviewer...actually I'm not really sure if this my first time reviewing one of your stories but I must say that I absolutely love them and I take it you're into cars and domination lol ^_^ Really can't wait to see how the relationships of the characters develop as well. Update ASAP! (B.T.W. You don't understand how much I absolutely love the way you throw Kouga in there).

hmmm that's how I react when I am in a bidding war. which reminds me looking for a black 1967 Chevrolet Impala.