rate_review Reviews

Oh goodie! Glad to see you brought this over here, I'll probably read it here rather than on MM. Ah hell, I'll probably read it in both places! But get to the second chapter already! ;-)

Okay. I am SO hooked! I can always relate better when Inuyasha is presented as a bit more thinking than purely ignorant, selfish brash idiot, which I do not think he solely is. You managed to make him proud and the way Inuyasha has to be, but still give him intelligence and the kind of soul-deep anguish that I think you'd gather after a couple of centuries of the kind of life that he has lead... I've got a question though, where are Miroku and Sango and Shippuo in all of this? And though Kouga was a bastard, that is really the way he is, despite all of his good qualities, when it comes to Inuyasha, there isn't much love to find.. I am curious about how you will work Sesshomaru, that'll be very interesting!
Looking forward to the next chapter!

I can't wait!!!

I like this, but I guess I was expecting more. You say it is a one shot, but your are missing the anal and some of the other warnings. I seriously hope there is more.

I am hooked...this chapter was awesome and I can't wait to see where you are going with this one...