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Yay! Something just told me that you had updated today. I was kinda hoping it would be 'Want to be your slave' but this is a good story too! I love that Kouga wasn't even trying to be overly cruel to Inuyasha, belittling him when he knew he shouldn't, and instead Kouga is just so freakin' STUPID that he honestly thought it was just a lowly, run of the mill youkai. And how the hell did he not smell their arousal? Maybe Kouga's nose is just broken, and that explains why he didn't pick up whatever would have been off in that youkai's scent that would've revealed it wasn't a normal youkai. Oh man but he really stepped in it now. Ghost youkai aren't the only youkai who can send you to hell! Tenseiga straight through the heart, hmmmm... But now that Tenseiga no longer has the meidou, it's once again a sword that can't cut. So therefor, Sesshoumaru didn't actually kill Kouga, he's probably just giving him a glimpse of hell. I wouldn't be surprised if you reveal that Kouga's mind is gone, and he has to face his demons, literally HIS demons, and then when Sesshoumaru pulls the blade back out he'll gasp for breath and be alive again. Well whatever you are planning I know it'll be AWESOME! Not to mention the mating lemon when it's all said and done. *wink*

I love how Sesshoumaru acts in this story. He is so cold yet has such passion for Inuyasha. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

cool. so far this is my favorite chapter. I like the confrontation between the guys :) keep up the writing!

Very well written. Can't wait to see how the wolf takes to hell.

Interesting story line. You have a lot of really good dialoge, but not much outside description. While I agree that Sesshomaru is generally stoic and strong, there are many cases throughout the series in which you see mild emotions from him... and he is definately not invincible.
happy writing

Loving it. Hope there will be more soon.

I love your writing...it is so originial and well written that no words can express how much joy I get from reading one of your stories....

Wow thanks for updating! This is a fantastic chapter. I never liked Kouga much to begin with. I wonder how Sesshomaru will react when Kouga tries to use the information on Inuyasha against him. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Kouga is such an idiot. I hope that Sesshoumaru will truly teach Kouga a lesson and poor Inuyasha was still waiting for his brother to show up. I hope there will be some make up sex involved.

Ah! So good! lol. I love truly-intimidating-demon-lord Sesshoumaru; a lot times we don't get to see him as such.
And of course at the end Kouga just has to resolve to dig his own grave even deeper, haha. Awesome. Can't wait for more of this story. =)