rate_review Reviews

:) re read this again and it was just as good the second time. I love how you stuck to their true nature, made it more real :)

I have to say that I loved this. It was a fairly short story, but very well written and with a happy ending of sorts!

I like the way you ended this. I'm glad you finally did end it! Had been dying to see what sort of visions Kouga was going to have from Tenseiga having been shoved through his heart. It was obvious to me that Sesshoumaru had sent his soul to hell with that trick rather than actually killing him, but what Kouga was going to see and do once he got there, I hadn't had a clue. I like the route you took, and the closure of that chapter as he quietly dragged his body back home afterwards. As for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, I really loved how you had Inuyasha trying to change and submit and Sesshoumaru finding amusement in it, and how he explained that they just need to accept themselves for who they are and the realization Inuyasha had that for once, Sesshoumaru actually had come back, that he wouldn't leave him. Given the rules of this particular universe, I found it very realistic, and I totally enjoyed it! :-)

Wow, I'm not big on yaoi but this was interesting, well written and I wish there was more to it. Great fic!!

I am so bummed. I wanted and still want more. It was over too quickly.

more pleeeese

At first I was unsure of how this was going to progress... but after reading more, I found this was really different than what I was expecting! I greatly encourage you to write more!!!!
Cant wait to see what happens to Kouga!
Oh but I'm dying for the mating lemon! (^o^)v

great so far and you did a excellent job of making Kouga in polite terms annoying, you actually go me to dispise him. can't wait for the next chapter.

I think I would also be pretty mad if I didn't get to read the mating lemon. Kouga is the biggest dumbass. He deserves everything coming to him. Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens to the mangy wolf.

Blasted cliff-hanger type ending of chapters...Great story though. I somehow have the feeling that Sesshomaru did not "actually" kill Kouga... maybe just sent him to "hell" to face a ghost demon? Anyway looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get it posted.