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Is this complete?

It is such a dark story, but interesting.

It's a beautifully written story. I loved the idea that envy is the most dangerous thing. There is a grammatical error in one place. Sesshoumaru says "anyways". The correct term is "anyway". You've ignored the fact that tenseiga can only bring people back once and that tenseiga was supposed to cut the demons from the underworld from above the person's head to bring them back to life, not to stab the person with it. But the ending was fitting. It didn't seem like Sesshoumaru would survive that.