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April 19, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I would love more
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April 19, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Please update your story
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was great and I love it. Just perfect how his plan had backfired.
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I've read it a few times but I just realized that just because Kag & Sessh finished the act it doesn't mention if their responses to the completed act are uttered when they are no longer under the affects of the trap. It also never mentions Inu's reply. I wish there was more to this because I'm curious about those things.
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good but we never heard Inu's response and we don't know if they'll feel the same when they leave this barrier. Will there be more ?
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January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As much as I hate to say it dear, I just wasn't feeling it. The format more than anything kinda killed it for me.
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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
not bad. some typo's and the format was a bit wonky (the sentence ran off the edge of the page so they couldn't be read.) but on the whole, great pwp ish smaut. ^^