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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how you have this story as a gradual progression towards the goal. You don't have Sesshomaru spilling his guts to Inuyasha in the second chapter. I like that! You have done well so far and I look forward to seeing what will happen next. Good luck with the next chapter!
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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! i´m already in love with this story!! sess mentally berating himself after he´d FINALLY pulled his head out of his a# and realised that inu is his mate, inu taking everything more or less in stride cause 'sess was never sane to begin with' XD and miroku is in the middle of it, fearing for his life - yet ogling a naked sess´ behind. oh my. i wonder when sango will buy a clue as to what is going on...and how bad inu will freak when HE does! creepy psycho brother wants to mate him AND knock him up to boot - make that multiple times, they have a clan to rebuild after all ;-) damn, i can hardly wait to see how its going on!
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I liked it.
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see whether Mirokus's prediction will come true or not. I really hope not, because I want some SessInu action. :)
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Three chapters just isn't enough! I need more! I love Sess and Inu incest fics and yours is so good so far.
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short but interesting. Cant wait to see where you take it - good luck
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this start is really good, I like how you keep sesshoumaru's character and the fact that don't you don't show him as a lovy dovey martyr's without Inuyasha's love. I really hope to see a nother chapter of this story.
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hm how i let you know if i like it after you put up the other 4 chappies :-) what? bribery you say? i would not do such a thing i'm insulted.
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! This sounds like it'll be interesting. :3 Can't wait to see what you have planned, dear!
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
getting somewhere