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Well, I read this whole fic, I hafta say that I'm rater sad about it. I get it all. and it's actually rather in character, but while i want kagome to get her revenge i'm just kinda torn all over for it. Her children are hateful lil monsters to be angry at her for not submitting to their father.

I hope that they all get to see the child she was born as, raised as, in the world where their father was nothing but wrong, in HER time not his, not where females are only an object, a possession a commodity. But where she is just as valued and beloved as any son.

Part of me also wants Her being taken like that to have EF'd everything up. that at some point they all figure out that b/c kagome never got to finish the jewel that HER time where demons are dying out or almost dead is b/c of the jewel, and how kagome's past played out, how Sesshomaru in his lust and greed for her and her submission has ruined the demon world.

I read the AN about how Kagome will get her revenge, but at the same time, i hope that she's not happy with it, that more or less, she's just sad, while sesshomaru and HIS children, as they obviously are not the caring miko's children all get their come`upance. Specially her eldest, who obviously knew and still hated her.

This was a sad but good fic. I hope to be able to check part 2 of it. - sugar0o

PS. I hope sesshomaru does feel something with her passing, he really would be a monster if he couldnt feel anything at all at her death.

I´m so glad that you are writing a sequel and specially if it is to make them pay. I say make them suffer like the dogs they´re. Keep up the GREAT!!! work. ;)

Well, I suppose that being raised by Sesshoumaru, Maru couldn't help being an arrogant little snot, but what Kagome should have repled was this: "You attack me for doing the exact same thing your father did. He put his pride before everything also, he simply had the power to take you all away from me. You say my pride kept me from being there for you, but what you don't realize is, that being bonded to your father would mean that I would be tortured with his constant presence for the rest of eternity! You all will grow up and go away to make your own lives and I would still be trapped here with him. Tell me, Maru...Would you be willing to be tied to someone you despise for the rest of eternaty under those circumstances? Judge yourself before you judge me. Evidently You have known who I am and where I am, but did you step forward to defend me or protect me? No, you did not. InuYasha is not why I never submitted, I am physically weaker, and have no family to look to for support and help. I gave up hope of rescue after my second year here. My mind is the only thing I have that was and is mine...it is the only thing he could not take from me without destroying his baby making machine. Very soon I will be free, free of this life and free of him. I am sorry to leave all of you, but he has made sure that none of you will care, so I guess it doesn't matter. Now get out of here and know that your all powerful, all perfect father is a fool that was defeated by a human woman.

pity she had to die to escape him... what about naraku though. how did the get rid of him?
seriously, i with kags on this... why the hell should she have submitted? it would have meant stripping away what was essential to her at her core. It's a pity her kids don't know that.

Hi, great chapter as always!!!, her children are insufferable just like sessh, I hope you're planning on how kags can get revenge,because she will have it, right??? I mean he is totally a jerk and so are their children, a little suffering or better yet major suffering wouldn't be wasted on them. ;)

Thank you for the update!!! Keep up the good work!!! ;)

Your story seems to be very interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter.