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for The Christmas Addition

by TheKaytla

person Peya Luna
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww...figures that the great sesshomaru is a big softie inside and can´t walk past a kid in need. i´d really like to read more of this!
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww such a cute story!!!
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww...what a wonderful 'Christmas cute' it was, too. Details schmeetails, hehehehe. Good thing they're rich, though, since Inu just bought a whole bunch of useless crap now...except maybe the tennis balls, get a couple rackets and those are salvageable. Something also tells me he might sneak the rawhide for himself, LOL.
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Hate you! xD Was hoping you wouldn't make a note like that about "not knowing how Sessh came across Rin" T_T Cause I wanted to demand that! Actually, I still will! TELL ME DAMN YOU!!!

Also, I love the twist of Sessh bringing home a different stray. It makes the fic so much better in the sense that you did what wasn't expected, and that's usually the best thing for an author to do imo (though sometimes it's good to do what people think; like... when I think they're gonna smex it up... they should smex it up xD)

Great job! <33

-DM
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful I hope you are going to write more.
person Vyper
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wish this was longer. I also would have been impressed that they were still going to buy a puppy. Oh well, nice story anyways.
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This would make a really cute and funny chapter story, seeing how Yasha and Sesshy would take care of rin. *grins* Merry Christmas!!!
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THanks for the work Mrry Christmas, and Im level 41 on Skyrim and haven't even started the main quest so I do understand. Hugs
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I laughed. Seriously, that's so Sess. No explanation, nothing, just 'this is our stray and we're keeping her.' poor inu, things are going to be very different now.
person nchsmi
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very cool...Awesome in fact!
Thanks for the Christmas gift. Happy holidays!
B reading U!