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for She Is Our Miko (I)

by darkduchess

person lara5170
schedule February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thre might be something very wrong with me becaue not only do I really enjoy this story but I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is either the third or fourth time I've come just to check to see if this story has been updated,and when I find there has been nothing new added to it...I end up reading the entire thing over from the start. I'm really looking forward to reading about Kagome's next experience with her new masters.
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seriously love this story. I hope you write more. It's currently my favorite, and find myself having to re-read through. :( The time between updates are too longggggggggggggggggg!
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Simply wicked. Love this plot.....great take on Sesshoumaru characterization.Totally alpha. AlSo enjoy his beta and the relationship with KAgome character. Hope you update next chapter soon.
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah hah, so Inuyasha is in this as well. Very nice! And I have to say, I love Miroku as Inu's pet, for such a perv as himself crawling around nude on all fours does indeed sound like his perfect lot in life :P And Kagome dropping the orb was very sexy, though I was almost half expecting Sesshomaru to have ghosted up behind her just in time to see it fall, and to subsequently punish her for it, hehe.

Great work once again, this chapter was amazingly erotic. I love that Inuyasha is in it, and I have to say it would be awesome to see him play with Kagome alongside Sesshomaru and Aimaru. Or perhaps even himself playing pet to his older siblings, that would be incredibly hot! Excellent work again, I can't wait to read more!
person lara5170
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is insane and I think I am too. I must be because I really want to read another chapter soon. I'm confused he said there were many pets that lived that lived there but did Iku then say that Kagome was Sessh's first pet ??? This story is interesting and I can't wait to find out what will happen next & who else she'll meet.
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story is insanely naughty and HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, I think you made me pass out at one point....lolllllllll CONTINUEEEEE!
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe I didn't get a chance to read this story earlier. I love how well Sesshomaru is characterized in this, and while the replacement of Inuyasha (I'm assuming he isn't in this) with Aimaru is a bit strange, I do like his character quite a lot. Their dominant nature is excellent,and the toys used are just awesome. The nipple chain and vibrating orb are excellent, and I love that even in Iku's prescence Kagome has to be on hands and knees. Very sexy pet play, and I like the subtle submissive side working its way out of Kagome. Excellent work, I can't wait to read more!
person yeiko87
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! This is great! Keep goingggggg! The only criticism I have is that the tense constantly shifts back and forth between past and present---not so much so as to largely detract from my enjoyment of the story, but enough to definitely notice. Aside from that, though, great exploration of the discovery of the true sub/Dom interaction. Very nice. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! what a delightfully naughty story. Would like a little more background on Aimaru, he is what Sesshoumaru would be without the shackles of Lord, Land, and propriety (family/heritage). While some of the story has to focus on the Kagome character, her evolution is not nearly so interesting as the demons' (doms') of your wonderful little tale of discovery and introspection. Please write more. I love to read, and if I have nothing to read I might feel inclined to clean my house or some other vile thing. Much later, perhaps, there could be a chapter where the tables are turned and Kagome gets to give as well as she gets. Let the bastard Naraku cast a spell in his jealous attempt to regain possession of the girl. Or I'm sure you can think of something much better. Thank you for your time and well received effort.