rate_review Reviews

This story is amazing! You are a great writer. I don't even feel like I'm reading a story because it feels like im watching a movie in my head, that's how easy it is to get lost in your story. You make it very easy to read and enjoy. Please update soon and keep up the great work. Ps... I literally read your story over and over again in one night. Thats how good it is!!

Its steamy alright but I don't know if I would want to kiss someone right after they were pounding someone else, but to each there own. I still like this story though. I do have a few questions will Kagara get the boot, and will Kagome get to see her family. I can't wait to see what happens next. thanks for wrighting.

This is amazing. Keep up the good work and i hope to read more soon.

This whole story is a pleasure to read and is written like a professional. The characters' personalities are each expressed in a very distinct and believable way, which is surprisingly hard to do. The story is structured in such a way that makes it very easy to read while keeping it interesting, not revealing too much of any situation all at once.. makes you want to know what happens next, even if its just a small thing!

The plot itself feels very unique and the character development is interesting to see (kagome accepting her life in the mansion, sess realizing his frustration/feelings for her, etc). The random interactions with random, insignificant characters (particularly the guards) help keep things feeling fresh and real! The suspense building is one of the strongest things here, it really makes you want to know (and sometimes fantasize about) what happens next!

Overall, a very well done and interesting, gripping story :) cant wait to see more! i hope miroku and kagome plan a daring escape

Please update soon. My keyboard is broken but I will review a.s.a.p..

Fantastic story so far!
Great story, even for those who aren't a fan or don't know the Inyuasha series. The writer does a fantastic job explaining her characters and leaves so much room for expansion.
The story just keeps unfolding and I can't get enough...

WRITE MORE OR ILL CRY! :(

This story is amazing...I can't wait for more!!!

well done for persevering. they reckon it's harder making it up as you go along rather than having it all planned out first, but i can't really comment since i always making it up as i go along or am jotting down a dream story line. >>
at any rate Kagura's going to be pissed when she realizes kags shrugged off her poison huh.

Sesshomaru healed Kagome. He keeps trying to justify logicaly his feelings for her. He's fighting a losing battle and losing is something he does not accept easily. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks, Starchilds

how did seshy not sense kagura? did she do something to wipe her scent? I do hope you have something dire planned for that bitch later.