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for This Sesshoumaru Burns

by darkduchess

person Jojo
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am still laughing... That conversation between Sesshomaru and Kagome was priceless. He is truly a bull-headed male with a one track mind. This is just too funny. I hope the rest of the chapters are this much fun.

By the way, I just adore your OCs in this story. They are just such a wonderful addition.
person Netsubo
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Duchess dear....I hate to be a bother...but two things...one...WHEN'S THE NEXT UPDATE???? And two..I'm a little confused on the family tree between Sesshomaru, Aimaru, Jabora and Inu Kimi. Ok so I get that Inu Kimi is Sesshomaru's mother. That's understandable. But what is Jabora and Aimaru to Sesshomaru and Inu Kimi? Several times it's written as if Aimaru is referring to Sesshomaru as his and Jabora's older brother, and then other times he's calling him his cousin and Inu Kimi his aunt. Then Jabora's said things like "your mother" to Aimaru as if Aimaru is her son too. It seems like it's going from brother to cousin and back again and mother and aunt and back again. Other than Sesshomaru, which is Inu Kimi's son? And which is the nephew? I'm confused.... :/
person eli
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
esta historia esta estupenda tiene todo lo que me gusta sigue asi
person Smut Princess
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories! Love everything you write! Wanted to leave review on Dok*ga but you don't allow anonymous reviews! :(
person beautifulstorm1991
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated. I still love this story!
person BadGyalD
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is some good stuff update soon
person Sweet
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter please update soon
person LLCoyote
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is my favorite story of yours. I've read all of your work now and I think it's very well done but this is definantly my favorite. It isn't as silly as Waking Up in Vegas, but it isn't as (I can't seem to find the right adjective) dark (not exactly but close) as She's Our Miko. Aside from the actual stories though, I love Aimaru. He has to be one of my favorite OC's I've ever seen in a story. His personality is engaging, his language is seductive and his demeanor is very interesting. I just think he's a lot of fun, especially when you pair him in with Kagome and Sesshomaru. Kagome's discomfort is amusing, and he seems to make up for the silence/coldness of Sesshomaru. I also very much enjoy how you portray Sesshomaru. He's dominant, persistent, and clearly intimidating, but he isn't a brute. Many stories (and I'm not saying they aren't enjoyable) have a very rough Sesshomaru, and while your portral doesn't exactly treat people (namely Kagome) like glass, he rarely looses his cool or asserts himself with physical strength because he just doesn't need to; she is weaker than he is so why should he have to actually try to hurt her. I think it's great. I think the entire story is interesting and engaging and I'm very curious to see where it will go.
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story. It's hilarious and sexy. You have a wonderful talent. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. Can't wait for the next update.
person Alii
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am burning for an update! Please more more!