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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Normally in a review I try to give decent constructional criticism, but I read it so quickly that I have nothing to really offer along those lines, lol. I didn't notice any mistakes, but then again I was more interested in this rough-n-tumble plot/PWP that ya have here. It has enough plot to fill you in with no major plot-holes and doesn't have too much information to sidetrack the reader.
Really, really hott! I always like a dominant Inuyasha and really enjoyed Kagome's spunkiness in this. I mean, a girl has needs too! The only thing that was missing was Kagome receiving a good smack on the bottom for being a bad girl LOL (^_^). I still think the very last line was funny, though; starting to get a little huffy and then she soothed his ego, "mine". I very much enjoyed this short but not-so-sweet oneshot. I will be looking for more of your writing. :)
Really, really hott! I always like a dominant Inuyasha and really enjoyed Kagome's spunkiness in this. I mean, a girl has needs too! The only thing that was missing was Kagome receiving a good smack on the bottom for being a bad girl LOL (^_^). I still think the very last line was funny, though; starting to get a little huffy and then she soothed his ego, "mine". I very much enjoyed this short but not-so-sweet oneshot. I will be looking for more of your writing. :)
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very hot one shot! Nicely done, very nicely done.
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Inuyasha when he is so agressive. I can just imagine what he is doing to Kagome and it is just so hot. Sometimes angry sex is the best sex.