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I am still waiting for the cream on this cake to be ready! where is the tension and lust!! come on feed ya girl some lusty scenes! lol! but I am happy you updated!! thank you please keep going because I'm still following!! Oh and by the way I enjoyed the drunken Inuyasha scene! Sesshy has a REALLY bad problem! stealing....wow.lol

oh it's so exciting to know that inuyasha knows about the crush sess has on him. Though for some reason i'm starting to feel a little bad for sess...dunn why but i feel inu has an unfair advantage over him. Anyway, was a little angry on sessh's behalf to know that inu experimented with kouga. Can't wait for the next chapter! It'll be interesting to see how inu gets closer to sessh.

Sesshoumaru seems excited. I hope that the next chapter that Sess and Inu will have a good time together. It is funny as hell Sesshoumaru has a shrine for Inuyasha.

LOL, awesome update! And good explanation! So it was deliberate on your part and an accident on Inuyasha's part that he didn't even notice but LUCKILY got away with because Sesshoumaru hadn't been paying attention. Shame on Sesshoumaru for stealing that photo! LOL, he has a love shrine! I thought you were going to reveal that he'd been up all night yanking it to that picture. Guess he'll save that for later. Is he going to be disappointed at the concert to discover Inuyasha isn't there, or is Inuzumi going to suddenly disappear and Inuyasha appear in her place? If so I can guarantee that there wouldn't be a Clark Kent / Superman moment of 'Hey, has anyone seen Inuzumi?' because she would be the last thing on his mind once Inuyasha shows up! LOL. Well whatever you decide to do, just keep doing it! P.S. I love Inuyasha saying he would climb him like a tree! ;-)

Great update! Noticed one little typo, more a slip of the proverbial tongue with your genders. I wasn't even sure if it was intentional at first or not, but when Inuyasha as Inuzumi is telling the story of wanting to find 'her' father he refers to himself in the male, saying he doesn't expect his dad to claim him as his son. Sesshoumaru didn't react to this so I'm assuming it was just a simple error on your part; it can certainly be hard to keep gender roles straight when even your character is deliberately having problems keeping his own gender role straight, but that is quite the slip of the tongue on Inuyasha's part for Sesshoumaru to not have noticed. I advise either replacing the word 'son' with 'kid' and keeping his smooth flow of speech, or you could put an ellipses right after 'his' and then the word daughter, revealing Inuyasha had to think about what he was saying. Boo-boos aside, though, I really liked the way you worked this chapter, and the big reveal, at least on Inuyasha's part, of realizing Sesshoumaru's feelings. Things certainly ought to be more interesting from here on out! Keep up the awesome work!

Inuyasha is so evil it cracks me up! Poor Sesshoumaru. He is being so damn cute and Inuyasha is being so damn onery! I love it! Please update soon since I gotta know about Kouga's relationship with Inuyasha too. I also like Kouga/Inuyasha pairings. Kouga is such a hottie too and I would love to see him all jealous over Sesshoumaru's obsession with Inuyasha.

Sesshomaru! How on earth did he miss "I don't expect to claim me as his son..." I thought he was perfection :P Love this chapter, I can't wait to see how much longer Inuyasha can go before he lures himself into his own trap and exposes himself to Sesshomaru. Hopefully long enough to encourage Sesshomaru into some...payback, on his idol :P Great work!

fist off i loooovvveee "hollywood whore" inuyasha as a rockstar is hot....second i am suprised that sesshoumaru did not pick up on it when inuyasha said "I don’t expect him to claim me as his son and we live happily ever after...I just want him to know what she’s going through...maybe visit her before..." stating in this sentence that she is actually a he....or was it a typo seeing how sesshoumaru is pretty sharp.

Inuyasha is so cute and his friends are in so much trouble. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha is going to do to Kouga and Miroku. Sesshoumaru is being such a gentleman offering to make tea for them. It is just so sweet. Now I can't wait until Sesshoumaru finds out who Inuyasha really is.

Oh geez. you just had to pick THAT did you?! i thought i was going to die laughing my poor native ass off!