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I think the story is moving along well. As for inspiration, I would say that there is a whole slew of topics to hit upon.

- Inuyasha's continued search for his father, and now with possible help from Sesshoumaru (though if what I think is going to happen does, it will be very interesting when things come to light). So far, I don't remember seeing any progress in that area on Inuyasha's side

- Inuyasha is in Japan, where his dying mother is, but he has yet to spend any time with her (even secretly).

- The continuation of the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and how it unfolds. It would be interesting for Inuyasha to have very male reactions to Sesshoumaru, while still in his female guise and how he would handle those moments. It would also be interesting if Sesshoumaru starts to become more and more attached the the female guise and find himself confused between his feelings for female/male versions of Inuyasha.

I hope this helps. I'm sure there is more I could come up with, but my brain is a little slow at the moment. All I have to say is, keep up the good work and I will wait in anticipation to read the next update.

Yay, you updated! I for one loved this chapter. It was funny seeing Inu's reaction to the long line; he'd never experienced going to a concert from the fan's perspective before. Sesshoumaru picking 'Inuzumi' up was also perfect, and accurate, because doing so would indeed be the polite thing to do. With as much as Inuyasha's been floundering, I'm surprised he hasn't totally blown his cover yet, LOL. And freakin' Kouga, should've seen that one coming. Like he could resist the opportunity to give Inu hell. I certainly hope you find the time/inspiration to keep going with this story because I love it and can't wait to see what happens next! Is poor Inu gonna end up running back and forth changing from one person to the other like that scene with Robbin Williams in Mrs. Doubtfire in the restaurant? LOL. I could just see him screwing that scene up too and showing back up as one of his two personas but wearing an article of clothing the other person had had on. Whoops! Though of course you don't have to do that if you're not ready for the big reveal yet. Something tells me the big reveal would be a long time in coming. First Sess has to get closer to Inu...and then maybe a little Sess/Inu action...and probably at the end is when he'll learn the truth. Ne? Though it'll still be funny as hell to watch whatever happens with Inu in this next upcoming chapter dealing with Sesshoumaru. However you decide to continue this story is fine with me so long as you continue it. :-)

Umm, more please!

Oh no! something is going to go wrong. I know it!

i just love "Aiko's" reaction. in fact, i do that alot to guys (especially the damn seniors). keep up the fantastic work!

neeh, this is fantastic update soon!

Y-gal shut down for some reason the server had an asthma attack or something but I'm so glad I found it over here on Adult fanfic! Sesshomaru keeps getting more and more adorable to me in his obsession with Inuyasha and somehow he still keeps his bad ass persona which is really cool to read since I've never read an Inu fanfic quite like this if Sesshomaru is obsessed people usually write him violently so or something like it so it's refreshing to see the same level of obsession on a lighter note. This is a really fun read and I can't wait to read more especially to find out who tops who!

this story is getting interesting. update soon.

Ahahahahahah! That was friggin' awesome!!! I most definitely like your portrayal of a 'girk' InuYasha. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Still loving it! More, more!