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by drcomalfy

person Arya
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I wanted to read some more!!!! Thank you for updating though I've been waiting a long time for this. Inu and sess are so cute together, though I think it's a. Little sad that inu knows that sess likes him a lot, and inu doesn't really know what he feels. Inu seems to have the upper hand in this situation and frankly I'd love it if he was brought down a peg or two. Would be really cool to see him getting super jealous because sess is paying attention to another guy or someone being interested in sess. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Please update soon !
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't know how the hell I missed your previous update, but chapter 15 was HILARIOUS! And now I get to read chapter 16, yay!
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really liked chapter 16, too. The awkward moments were funny, LOL, but if people have been jumping the gun with their relationship then I agree with you, this little bit of teasing was necessary. Sure, I could see wanting one of them to have lost it and kissed the other during that scene, but they aren't that far gone yet and so I think them managing - at the last second - to pull themselves back into reality was more realistic. I also really liked the way Inuyasha had planned the whole thing out from the beginning, that Inuzumi got pissed and left, but in reality Inuyasha wasn't pissed off about it, and just latched onto that moment as the perfect excuse to ditch out as Inuzumi and come back as himself. Plus, he also knows that Sesshoumaru is into him, so like you said Inuyasha was thinking this would be fun. It was already part of his revenge, LOL. I don't think he realizes just how into him Sesshoumaru actually is, though, if he was truly oblivious to the way the daiyoukai reacted to him examining his bruise or the way he tried to shrug off the 'gay moment' of them being crashed together. Still, I like the way you're building it up more slowly, so that eventually, when one of them finally does lose it, it'll be all the more exhilarating and surely worth the wait. Keep up the awesome work! This story kicks ass!
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally some progress! I love seeing Sesshoumaru flustered!!!

Can't wait for your next chapter!

Keep up the amazing work,
RukiRomance
person harpergunbunny
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I went into this wanting to dislike it. Its got all the signs of being something that could be horrible: high school, fame... well i have to say your skill has sold me on this fic. I really enjoy this fic and have to give you props for taking situations that usually end up ruining a fic and mastering them. Great job!
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I say patience, smatience. We readers will never say no to updates, never.

However, you definitely are being a tease. Just how much taller is Sesshoumaru than Inuyasha? Couldn't Inuyasha have copped a sniff of Sesshoumaru when they collided? You could have had Sesshoumaru bending down a little while steadying Inuyasha. And what is this about Inuyasha worrying about gay moments between guys? I'm gonna have to go back and reread to double-check, but I thought he has gone down this path before, and since he can sense some interest from Sesshoumaru, why worry about seeming gay? In any case, I do like how they are developing and managing to have fun together.

As always, I will be on the lookout for future updates.
person satterb
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Haven't seen this story in a while. Thank you for updating. I hope Sesshoumaru gets somewhere with Inuyasha soon. He just keeps getting jerked around, the poor thing.
person nea
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! So nice to read about a flustered Sesshy. lol I wonder what's gonna happen on their walk home.... ;-)
person KEdakumi
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HeheHe.... So Sesshoumaru's gonna be the 'woman' in this relationship... I kinda hope.... Love Inu's reaction. If he's already talked to the CEO of the building, guess that means he met his father already. They didn't recognize any scents off each other or anything? Just wonderin'. Can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back. I was happy to read the update as I am a whore fan.

I will say that I am a little confused as to why Inuyasha went back to his male appearance with Sesshoumaru, but I assume that will come later. Since Inuyasha is taking Sesshoumaru home, does that mean he will get to meet the family? At this point, I'm left wondering if the band met with Sesshoumaru's father in person or just over the phone as I had always felt that he was Inuyasha's father as well.

I guess I will just have to wait and see. Please update soon.