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by TheKaytla

schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this update! Finally! Of course, we all knew the secret to using Tetsusaiga was feeling the need to save/protect Sesshoumaru, but it's about damn time Inuyasha realized that. Even though he hasn't put two and two together, since that feeling of wanting to stay and protect his brother is still there, hardened within him, then I predict he'll have no trouble using the Kaze no Kizu again, at least in an actual battle. It might frustrate the hell out of him trying to summon it for practice and not understanding why he can't, but eventually he'll get it. I also love how you still had Sesshoumaru lose his arm, but in this universe it wasn't Inuyasha's doing. Well, technically he did cut it off, but to save Sesshoumaru's life. I loved that! All around great job. Can't wait to see what happens next. :-)
person Niako
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Thanks for the update. I cannot wait for Inuyasha to take care of Sesshoumaru.
person Vyper
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are evil......EVIL........evil..... I want to know what happens with Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. NOW! Like RIGHT NOW! Ok you have your warning......carry on.
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sesshy will save your butt Yasha.
person Nesha85
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soons. We waited a long time for ch5 update. I want to know if Sesshoumaru saves Inuyasha. Please. Loving the story Niako
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Cliffhanger, indeed, but good update nonetheless. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! The interactions between siblings the moments of drama and the action! Love it!!!
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO!! Are you serious!! Why did you stop THERE! *cries*
person js
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I hope Inuyasha jumps into this battle or something. :)
person Vyper
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love that new chapter. I hope you have more and soon. I like it when the brothers are still acting like they hate each other at first so that the fun stuff can come when they are ready.