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what a wonderful story. I have enjoyed reading it so far. characters are in point and a joy to read. I want more plz! Will there be more?

Noooooooo!!!!!!! His arm! Gah! Oh, man, I hope he gets Bakusaiga eventually... Please update this story; don't leave us hanging!!!

Wow this is a new twist on the brothers story together and I am intrigued. So curious about there past and why their father treated them so differently. Hope you update soon!

I just wanted to let you know I drew a picture inspired by that fanfiction. I made a few changes but still it has the same concept.

A link to it is here http://inumaru101.deviantart.com/art/Till-The-Death-430206039

I really liked this fanfiction and I hope you continue it someday. It was really good and you kept the characters in character you did a really good job. It s one of my favorite stories

I really hope you continue on with this story. I'm really enjoying it so far. It's very well written and refreshingly different from other stories I've read. Great job.

Oh my gosh! You got to continue, I mean... dang it. Well I can tell why you felt bad about writing ch. Six and what not. Shoot I feel bad about it to. Man this could be one of those epic alternet fics that you could read several times and still want to at lease one more. Though how you are going to write more is kind of beyond me. Except with how you have more youkai and lesser demons attacking the western lands or going for Sesshoumaru's rule. I'm stumped on who or what to create as a new villian, if you know what I mean. Sorry I don't have much ideas on that besides and few hundred or thousands that is all ready out... though, I could come up with a few just to tired at the moment; lol. Well I like how you started Fortification from ch. 1 up. I think you did real good on the discription of his situation. Could do more or not. -shrugs- Either way your right in the middle and as a reader I can picture it real well. I also enjoy how you have Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's bond. It's fresh and not like a lot of other ones that I know of that just toss the brotherly part and kick right in. Basically it feels real as if the characters are to. Kind of sends... oh geaze, I forgot the word for it. And this is way to long lol. Well thank you for writing this story and I'll keep an eye out for new chapters. TTYL

-Inu Luna of The Moon
also on dokuga

W-w-w-wow!!!! I totally love where this is going! That last chapter totally did it for me. I can't wait to read more. You have the brothers' personalities down perfectly, and even brought elements from canon into the fic even though it's obviously AU...well at least I think this would count at AR at least. Idk. lol. Anyways I really like it so far. :D

So this has lots of promise, I'm excited, please continue!
I especially like what you did with the brothers' Dad, and how they still grew up apart regardless of the fact that he didn't die early on.

That last chapter was awsome! I just feel for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. Having to cut off your brother's arm even in the series had to be devistating to the brothers. Inuyasha was really just defending himself and Kagome. I think though that Sesshoumaru was really testing Inuyasha and had not expected Inuyasha to figure out the powers of tessaiga. I don't think Sesshoumaru really was going to kill Inuyasha. He really could have killed him several times and didn't. It was like he was toying with the pup or training him. It just sucks that the end of the series the two of them still seem at odds when they should embrace the fact they both helped defeat Naraku and all those foes together. Anyway, I love this story.

No, My Poor Sesshy!! *wails* Why must you hurt so! *cries* Those bastards need to give up, and face the facts that you will remain The True Lord of The Western Lands! *growls* The only good thing that came out of this is that Yasha stopped being an ass and NOW wants to put whatever it takes into protecting his brother.