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for Careful What You Wish For...

by TheKaytla

schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I really liked this. Be careful what you wish for, indeed. I definitely wouldn't mind seeing a sequel. I'm curious whether or not Miroku might be forced to utalize his ofuda to even the score, or if it would turn out Inuyasha isn't even opposed to switching things up. After all, with how merrily he laughed at Miroku being a virgin, by that point the term clearly meant in reference only to receiving another man, it makes me wonder if Inuyasha is, in truth, not a virgin in that sense, himself. Whatever you decide to do, no worries. This does work well as a stand-alone piece, but the prospect of that 'egg' you showed us that just might hatch and run havoc is a tantalizing one, indeed.
person Julia
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this fantastic InuYasha/Miroku fic!!!
I love this pairing and there are too few storys about them.

Thanks for making InuYasha the experienced one and reminding us that he is indeed the very much older and therefore experienced one.
Miroku's reaction was hilarious and the open end for a sequel makes me trembling for more!
But first thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful fic.
person Peya Luna
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hilarious! miroku thinks about how to seduce poor, virginal inu only to get screwed - literally LOLOL and what a nice smutty scene it was..*sigh* and of course inu is right, miroku will want more. but if the monk thinks he can turn the tables he´s sorely mistaken, i don´t think he´ll be able to catch inu of guard and get to top him - though maybe he can bribe him with ramen+blowjobs to let him top ;-) anyway, i´d REALLY like to see a part two of this, preferably with some mentions with whom exactly inu made his previous experiences...he did seem awfully experienced,didn´t he? makes one wonder who is the real lecher here LOL
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my go oh my god ~ (really, I could continue forever, but you get the point, right?). I LOVED it. I'm a sucker for those two together, especially the stories where totally Inuyasha overruns Miroku, and Miroku doesn't see it coming. I would beg you to write a sequel, you know, one where Miroku tries to prove his own to/seme-up Inuyasha sex-wise but ends up on the buttom anyways, and it might even include some hillarious Bankoutsu or Jakoutsu-interference where Jakoutsu finds Miroku/Inuyasha adorable and Inuyasha/Miroku gets all protedtive-ish, but I think I've used up my quota of gushing and fan-girling on a fic. (pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaseeeeee write a sequel!!! XD). .......... I love you!

I sincerely apologize for this madness.
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! You described it so well and yet kept them so in character I could almost imagine the story happening! And what a wonderful tale you wove! Keep it up!
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm writing this because a "friend of mine" held me at knifepoint.

THIS FIC IS AWESOME!

It- unfortunately for my inusesst and fortunately for anyone who is silly enough to like what I write- makes me like this... this PAIRING that I'd always shied away from because I only saw them as friend (and still sorta do) but it opens so many effing door that I want to kill the author with gumdrops because of it (it's SO your fault)! So I will send anyone that demands updates from me to you since I'll be too busy attempting to write my own inumiro fic to update any of my other fics!

wahahaha!

>.> I like this fic lots. /girlgasms over it -hearts-

-DM
person Vyper
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This oneshot was cute, it would though make for a great story. I would love to find out how many men and women Inuyasha has had. The hanyou boy is gorgeous so it wouldn't surprise me if he has been with several people.
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this one a lot, funny to see Miroku's lechery turned around on him in such a manner, rather unusual though very nice indeed! I love that you portrayed Inuyasha as being the experienced partner as well in this one; it would seem likely that even as a half demon he'd have found at least a partner or two after several hundred years alive. Excellent work, I'd really love to see this one evolve into a two shot or a regular story. It'd be funny as all hells to see Miroku plot and scheme some sort of payback for Inuyasha upstaging him only to wind up over Inuyasha's knee or used thoroughly all night, etc.