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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so now kagome is in a bad way because of sesshomaru but what will happen when its over and he's in control of himself again? is he a little in control of himself when he told kagome not to fight him? what will the others think or do when they find out? will kagome try to run away once she has the stregnth to do so? what will kagome's family think once they find out what's happend to her?
update soon onegai
ja ne
update soon onegai
ja ne
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September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue with this story, it was really good. Nice concept and good writing style by the way.
The only thing i dislike is the word you use for sit? I mean the fic is written in english, they use english so shouldnt sit be SIT! instead of the other? It just makes her sound like one of those stupid anime fan girls who always shout KAWAII DESU!!! even though they dont know a lick of japanese.
The only thing i dislike is the word you use for sit? I mean the fic is written in english, they use english so shouldnt sit be SIT! instead of the other? It just makes her sound like one of those stupid anime fan girls who always shout KAWAII DESU!!! even though they dont know a lick of japanese.
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. please update.