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for Dabbles in Drabbles

by TheKaytla

schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My thanks to ardentes for requesting a sequel! This was awesome! Poor Inuyasha, LOL, though somehow I don't think he'll mind submitting to Sesshoumaru's 'blackmail'. I also like that you showed Izayoi getting curious and thoughtful but not too surprised or upset when Sesshoumaru started dancing with Inuyasha. Especially with the way the two of them exited not long after, she might just assume that he'd done that simply because he needed to get Inuyasha alone to talk to him about something, and she might ask later in passing what all that had been about, but something tells me that when - not if - she learns the truth, that she'll be okay with that, too. Lovely little universe you've created here. I personally wouldn't mind seeing even more installments, LOL, though I know how it feels to get requested to do a continuation of a universe you hadn't planned on continuing. So it's fine as-is, but thanks for the sequel all the same! :-)
person ladytokyo
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
For the love of god i want to read on and see if inuyasha goes to Sesshomaru hotel room. I just love tthis please please update soon.
person ardentes
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Drabbles or fic-lets 7 and 8 were very good. I really enjoyed them. I found the surprise step-brothers and the dancing to be very intriguing. I loved when Sesshomaru said that Inuyasha brought him so low, admitting that he did get jealous yet trying to blame Inuyasha for it. I loved it! Anyway, if you are accepting requests, would you mind doing one where Inuyasha is dancing and Sesshomaru gets jealous and hot at the same time by watching Inuyasha dance? If you could, that would be amazing! Anyway, whatever you post next, it will most likely be enjoyable and i look forward to reading whatever you post next!
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol... gotta love it when sesshy loses!! sweet. thx
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like these little one shots! They are cute. My favorite one is the Foxtrot one shot. Very good job!
person Demitria Miriam
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WAHAHA.

Oh lawwd, I loved that sooo much xD I'm also super happy you put extra jealousy in there! One of my favorite parts was Sessh's double-look (figuratively I guess) at Inu's calm reaction xD Oh oh and then this line:

"We'll just see about that," the hanyou concluded cryptically.

XDD I actually laughed fairly loud at that XDD I also really like having seen the "process" of Sessh's jealousy unfolding, and then his words to Inu later, "It is beneath me. Yet again and again, you bring me low, hanyou."

OHHH and then when he says, "There are consequence" (for forcing me to feel like this) XDDD

Last, WHERE'S THE SMUT?! XD Great job! I adored it soo much x3 Copy&paste ftw >>. *slinks off*


-DM
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good update! LOL, poor Inu, though he did bring it on himself.
schedule February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the latest addition! I love how Inuyasha was thinking to himself in advance both the cliche chick-flick scenario and the cliche cheesy porn scenario, which looks like it's happening after all at the end there! LOL. I love the twist that they found out they are going to be stepbrothers, a nice twist while still leaving them technically unrelated so it's not really incest. Finding out they were really long lost half-brothers could have been totally awkward, but this way, it looked to me like Sesshoumaru was actually looking forward to having Inuyasha in the family. Easy access! LOL. Nicely done!
person Vyper
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the dancing drabble. I wish it was longer, but that is ok. It is so romantic and I could see Sesshoumaru with Inuyasha dancing across the floor. He is so graceful and beautiful.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll be killed for this... I just know it!

Pairing: Sess x Inu
Emotion: Jealousy!
Object: Feather
Word: Fool
Wildcard: Kagura

So totally separate from our LJ I swear .___. hurrrm

-DM