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Awesome story, you can tell how well as person writes when it'd as descriptive as you made it. I cringed for inuyasha during the rape scene but I could totally picture it happening. Glad it ended with a happy tryst.

Excellent story, very emotionally charged throughout, with my own ranging from 'oh shit they're in trouble now' to 'chop his fucking nuts off with the rusty sword'. Uncouthness aside, I've been reading fanfiction for years and your works are some of the few that are not only written in understandable English, but are also actually interesting to read. +5 writing skills to you.

what a story!! you get better with each plot..can't wait for your next one

WOW! This was an EXCELLENT story. The descriptions, dialogue, and mood were all perfect. I especially loved how you made one scene flow into another without chapter breaks--that's hard to do. I'm thrilled to have found this. :D

This was so amazing I can't even express myself. The writing was perfect and you could feel the horror, tension and the hurt in every sentence. I hope you continue writing stories, because 3 quarters of the writers in the Inuyasha fandom can't write at all. Keep up the good work :) And again, I absolutely adore this story. Jeez, I wish I could find a guy who loved me that much! Inuyasha was written in perfect character by the way.

I wish there was more. This is such a good story.

It was written incredibly well! you captured the emotions a rape victim would be going through perfectly.
i enjoyed this one especially due to his willingness to protect her and love her. glad she was able to heal him (mostly) so quickly after the attack.
i don't agree as much with the explanation how long it may take victims to recover from the trauma (that the tougher ones get over it faster), but it was still very well done and explained amazingly well.
thank you for writing this!! looking forward to hte next
-savvy