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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Inuyasha is able to forgive Sesshoumaru although that will take time. Poor kid is freezing to death and needs his big brother to help him out.
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know the funny part is I could see Sesshoumaru telling his little brother he was proud of him. Even with all their battles, I think Sesshoumaru had a grudging respect for Inuyasha and had the two of them just been together without everyone else's opinions of them I think their relationship would have been better.
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your paragraphs have a lot of detail. Is there any way to break it up a little to make it a little easier to read?
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July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. Did everyone die on Inuyasha or something? That seems to be the theme, but I am not sure. Your fic, it seems kind of dark, but good so far. It is just confusing. I will wait for your next chapter.
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July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How depressing for Inuyasha. :( I hope things get better for him soon.