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for The Great Trial

by WinterDovane

person Kobanya
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
-cue RD fangirl squeal- I love this story! I really meant to leave a review sooner, but with college finals coming up, I've been so busy. @.@ I love the characterization in this story, especially for Sesshomaru. I'm also pleasantly surprised by how you handle Inuyasha's (so far minor) dealings in the Western lands. He's still that same gruff guy we all know and love, but I especially enjoy how you also make sure to show that there's some intelligence in that thick head of his. Definitely can't wait to read more, especially since I wanna know how Sesshomaru is gonna deal with Inuyasha's little 'problem'. :D
person Vyper
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved that long last chapter but I want more damnit! You left this on another cliffhanger and I need to know how Inuyasha is going to react to the fact Sesshoumaru was forced to go out of his way to be a total ass to him. It will be interesting to see the results and I think Sesshoumaru's Mom is a total bitch and not in a good way.
person addiena saffir
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aw come on! lol all those lovely chapters i read for the first time today i kinda of forgot it wasn't a finished tale and was a little miffed at were it stopped. oh well guess i will have to impatiently wait for the next installment. Love the story so far
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really awesome story please update soon! I can't wait to read Inuyasha's reaction! ^.^
person mcdgoddess
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have re-read this chapter three times now, specifically the part that leads to Inuyasha making his "final" decision. There's something very chilling and emotional about that scene. You have written it so that you really sense that he's at his "end". I really liked that it wasn't all super dramatic, just that sad laugh and Inuyasha's special way of saying goodbye to his brother. Each new chapter just makes me want more of this story! I LOVE it!!!
person Vyper
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru finally kisses Inuyasha. It is so romantic and sad at the same time. I want for Inuyasha to be happy and for Sesshoumaru to be able to tell Inuyasha the truth. Inuyasha deserves to know it.
person mcdgoddess
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love how this story has started and I look forward to reading more!!! Its always nice when I find a story that is really focusing on the development of the characters and this plot with the "trail" has me really excited about this story! Can't wait for the next update!!! :)
person Kitty
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely perfect. Keep up the good work! The flow of the story is amazing and I can't even begin to describe how great it is.
person Vyper
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You put a cliffhanger in there on purpose didn't you? I want more, I love this story so far and I can't wait to read the rest. Please don't wait so long for an update. I gotta know what Inuyasha said!
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update! I love the glimpse into Sesshy's thoughts in regards to how painful this has been for him.