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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow long chapter. I have to say nothing about it was filler though. You moved Inuyasha from partial acceptance to battle to a cliffhanger. (evil cliffie)
I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out.
I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out.
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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
after all that awesomesause he Lost the potion? *facepalm... shakes head, Inuyasha!!! hehehe loves the doggie ride and the speech. poor Xin, looking forward to hot stuff in next chappie. The action was utterly amazing as were the developments. However You had an angst warning.... hmmmm.. perhaps that needs a bit of work. Or my angst meter is stuck again. GREAT story update soon.
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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait to read more and boy it would be nice to see Inuyasha kill Sesshomaru's mother! lol Although that is just the saditic part of me that wants her to pay for everything.
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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lovely work! i was late for class today because I couldn't stop reading this! lol wasn't important anyway, but I love your story! the way you write Sesshomaru makes me laugh and breaks my heart at the same time. It's absolutely fantastic! i'll be checking back for more! love this!
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was going to be the same story as the other site, but i see you made changes. so i will have to start over on both just to keep up. lol lol lol
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another amazing chapter. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will gain his brother's trust and perhaps court Inuyasha to become his mate rather then scaring the crap out of Inuyasha by kissing him. I can just hear Inuyasha freaking out. "What the fuck Sess? We are brothers you ass not suposed to be lovers so quit trying to scar me for life ya bastard."
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh yay! Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are so cute together! Sesshoumaru seems to be already showing protective tendency toward Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru's mother would totally flip if Sesshoumaru took Inuyasha as his mate. lol more more more please. I love it!
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh hot damn, damn, damn!!! Egads, lookit! Sesshoumaru sealed his vow with a kiss!! (sigh) That's almost... romantic.^^
I just love this story, oh god, I cannot remember the last time a story sent my heart racing so fast - the sheer emotion it evoked - damn, it was not only Inuyasha that suffered from a nearly constant rush of adrenaline. Although no one could blame him, huh, I was irritated with Sesshoumaru's lame-ass stalling, even when armed with the knowledge of the trial. Inuyasha should really learn how to milk the situation to his full advantage - just look at how desperate Sesshoumaru was and play hard to get at his best.
And perhaps a hard smack with a rolled-up newspaper to his lordy nose wouldn't go amiss. ^^
I just love this story, oh god, I cannot remember the last time a story sent my heart racing so fast - the sheer emotion it evoked - damn, it was not only Inuyasha that suffered from a nearly constant rush of adrenaline. Although no one could blame him, huh, I was irritated with Sesshoumaru's lame-ass stalling, even when armed with the knowledge of the trial. Inuyasha should really learn how to milk the situation to his full advantage - just look at how desperate Sesshoumaru was and play hard to get at his best.
And perhaps a hard smack with a rolled-up newspaper to his lordy nose wouldn't go amiss. ^^
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very cool chapter. I like that Inuyasha's own power freed him rather than the elders' spell.
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes yes, finally finally... loved it sooo... sweet. Thanks for writing. That was an utterly amazing chapter. The first part is like grrrr, then its like huh! Then its "Go Inuyasha!" then Noooo... so much [ain, and finally all ahhhhhhh... sweet! thanks again. Am sick so gonna blame that if the review seems somewhat insane. :D