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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. Sesshoumaru gives so much of himself and to let Inuyasha fuck him was beautiful. I can imagine his gorgeous face as he rode Inuyasha. Still, I would like to see Sesshoumaru take Inuyasha and it just sucks that we can't get a new chapter right now. Still, I understand. I had to put my writing on hold for a bit. Gotta pay bills and work ya know.
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha always has to fight everything. Even things that feel good.
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow...Sesshoumaru really does love his brother that much to for an alpha like him to do that for Inuyasha. They have a long way to go...but the seem to be getting there slowly. :) I like it and can't wait to read more. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Before I go on and on about how amazing this fic is, I'm going to answer the questions you posed, because they are good ones and because you do strike me as an author who truly takes each suggestion into account.
I think that Miroku and Sango make a perfectly fine side-story, and if you can find a way to work them in that will help further along Inu Yasha's relationship with Sesshoumaru, then by all means, go ahead. It would help his trust in his brother greatly if Sango knew something about the Great Trial (I mean, demon slayers know a ton of shit that they don't talk about without needing to, right?) and could help put some of his fears at ease. They should have six children, with a seventh on the way--Miroku would waste no time knocking Sango up, after all, and in five years together, she has had enough time to pop out six of them.
I'm not sure how many more characters from the original story could show up, unless they were baddies that never got finished off, and I know there aren't many of those. I do like the incorporation of Kouga and Shippou, though. I was hoping they'd appear, and then they did! :D On that note, yes, I think they should keep appearing, if only to potentially give Sesshoumaru a romantic rival, or, barring that, to give Inu Yasha a hard time for being the bitch in the relationship. :3 Also, Shippou needs a home, and Sesshoumaru's other fox adviser (he has one, right, or am I confusing him with the fox Elder?) could use a protegee.
I don't think Yao Xin's children would be moved. I think they would be briefly chastised, but Sesshoumaru DID take their father from them, and their father DID abandon their home country to join teams with their most detested enemy. As sad as it will be for Yao Xin, I think they will have to be killed. HOWEVER, I think you could save him some undue stress if he were the one to make that decision; perhaps Sesshoumaru is trying very hard to keep them alive for Yao Xin, but his adviser realizes it is a wasted effort? I don't know. You're brilliant, whichever you decide will obviously work. :)
Lastly, please god keep their relationship going. I say this purely from a selfish standpoint, because you write smut so well, and DAMNIT I want to see Sesshoumaru take Inu Yasha, repeatedly and often. However, I realize that it... It is very difficult to write this, hold on. I believe it makes more SENSE if they take a rather awkward break, because Inu Yasha was unwilling, and sex doesn't magically break down barriers (though it should). He needs time to come to grips with his growing trust, with what happened, and with all that Sesshoumaru will certainly be doing/saying in an effort to gain his trust. Also, Sesshoumaru needs to angst a little while longer, because seeing him try to come to grips with the fact that he may (GASP) actually find Inu Yasha ATTRACTIVE is way hilarious.
Okay. I'm sorry that I just spammed the hell out of his review, lol, but your fic is so good!!! I can't help but imagine what I would do with it, but I know that whatever you write will be perfect because you certainly haven't disappointed me so far!
I eagerly await your next update. :)
I think that Miroku and Sango make a perfectly fine side-story, and if you can find a way to work them in that will help further along Inu Yasha's relationship with Sesshoumaru, then by all means, go ahead. It would help his trust in his brother greatly if Sango knew something about the Great Trial (I mean, demon slayers know a ton of shit that they don't talk about without needing to, right?) and could help put some of his fears at ease. They should have six children, with a seventh on the way--Miroku would waste no time knocking Sango up, after all, and in five years together, she has had enough time to pop out six of them.
I'm not sure how many more characters from the original story could show up, unless they were baddies that never got finished off, and I know there aren't many of those. I do like the incorporation of Kouga and Shippou, though. I was hoping they'd appear, and then they did! :D On that note, yes, I think they should keep appearing, if only to potentially give Sesshoumaru a romantic rival, or, barring that, to give Inu Yasha a hard time for being the bitch in the relationship. :3 Also, Shippou needs a home, and Sesshoumaru's other fox adviser (he has one, right, or am I confusing him with the fox Elder?) could use a protegee.
I don't think Yao Xin's children would be moved. I think they would be briefly chastised, but Sesshoumaru DID take their father from them, and their father DID abandon their home country to join teams with their most detested enemy. As sad as it will be for Yao Xin, I think they will have to be killed. HOWEVER, I think you could save him some undue stress if he were the one to make that decision; perhaps Sesshoumaru is trying very hard to keep them alive for Yao Xin, but his adviser realizes it is a wasted effort? I don't know. You're brilliant, whichever you decide will obviously work. :)
Lastly, please god keep their relationship going. I say this purely from a selfish standpoint, because you write smut so well, and DAMNIT I want to see Sesshoumaru take Inu Yasha, repeatedly and often. However, I realize that it... It is very difficult to write this, hold on. I believe it makes more SENSE if they take a rather awkward break, because Inu Yasha was unwilling, and sex doesn't magically break down barriers (though it should). He needs time to come to grips with his growing trust, with what happened, and with all that Sesshoumaru will certainly be doing/saying in an effort to gain his trust. Also, Sesshoumaru needs to angst a little while longer, because seeing him try to come to grips with the fact that he may (GASP) actually find Inu Yasha ATTRACTIVE is way hilarious.
Okay. I'm sorry that I just spammed the hell out of his review, lol, but your fic is so good!!! I can't help but imagine what I would do with it, but I know that whatever you write will be perfect because you certainly haven't disappointed me so far!
I eagerly await your next update. :)
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! I hope that you up-date soon!!!
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol Good to know on the angst thing. Dont slow it down please its at a good pace, and Inu's heat is not done. Lol Sesshy is so good here, I really want Inu to want him, bad. change of heart stuff. Sad the Nymph died - jealous Sesshy would be fun. I do think bringing Kouga and Shippo into the story is a stretch, they are very on the side, and the story is about Inu. Having them visit is fine, but have a spin off that focuses on them if you want. Xin's kids... you call. Good job all around, and good fun.
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December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just cruel to end it like that! And of course he leaves without telling anyone right as his heat is kicking back in! I guess all of the great thoughts were spent on the battle! Lol! Finally caught up on the last two chapters and I'm still loving where this story is going!
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha. He needs his big brother to help him get through his heat. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i realy enjoy the little changes. up date soon.
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol! oh you are cruel cruel! :) you left us hanging. come on you have to update now. cause that was so good and I have to read more soon. and that mer person rescuing Inuyasha and flirting with him in the middle of battle that was hilarious. lol. please please give us more. it'll be a christmas present to us? :)